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What's good Its A nice Song But Your Mix Is bad An you should get it mastered. Your vocal sound pretty good besides the echo and the vocals being to low. The name of the song name game changing is wrong to your rapingthe same things these other guys rapping Change it for real for real with some real life pain on this track but you can really rap an got bars push to do better.????

You spit I think you just need better production which is a quick fix feel me to be honest all you need is what fits your style like a tech 9 type beat and then get in the booth do your thing on the mic and then get the track mix down

The beat is very poorly mix and mastered.. Sounds like the studio equipment is cheap.. The quality is definitely not there.. I barely can understand anything that you are saying. Even if you were spitting good bars, I still couldn't understand it. Keep working and improve your quality of music #IPromise

First thing that got my attention was the beat. I love it. Then you come in with the hook and I can say that I like the words and the melody but I was not impressed with the over all delivery. This continued through the verses where I just wasn't feeling it. I'm not saying that it was bad at all, I just didn't feel any emotion behind your words and with the overall mood of the song I expected there to be some feeling behind it.

haha!!! Nice. The beat is nice. Cool hook and verses too. The flow and chorus are catchy . Would like to hear better quality on the vocals, some seem a lil' low..but overall tight track . Good Luck hmu for a collab.

I like the piano cords on the production, I will say that. Your voice is clever, I will say this. However I just thought I was about to hear something that was suppose to be Game Changing, you know. My name is SplitEndz The Profit here in Los Angeles and I'm number 6 in ranks for Los Angeles HipHops category. My uncle Bugleblack who is number 4 in ranks for Los Angeles HipHops category are real musician's, So if your looking to spend your trap on unique production, #HAYB #HOLLAATYABOY

Aye bro, keep working, love how this is sounding, great verses, the lyrical ability is definitely there as well as the instrumentation. Deep meaning with nice sound organization and execution on the concept in general. Great work!

ok bra respect this but right know the song could use a lot more studio time just to get the balance between the beat and your lyrics and the backgrounds has too much vibration but the songs good keep doing bra

It's not bad bro. Your first verse was tight, the second, I feel you could do better with practice and revision. I feel like the chorus got mundane mid way so maybe try just run chorus one time in the beginning and once in the mid point. Overall not bad content lyricly but the vocals can get cleaned up some in my opinion. If you want any pointers on how to do that let me know.

Pretty dope bro, lyrics are pretty good to. Like the message. Just keep working. Only thing I'd say is you need better quality. Mic wise or where ever you recorded it. Loving the beat is this an original beat.

my first thought when i heard the hook almost sounded like slim shady almost was ready to here some crazy cartoon lyrics but i like the hook with the melody on the beat overall it sounds ok

This song has a lot of commercial potential. Hook is nice ,beat and lyrics match nicely and could be appealing to multiple demographics. Just needs to be sharpened up mix wise- eq, compression , stereo width etc so everything sits in the mix properly. Keep honing in 1DaMeyz you are building a nice brand for yourself. Peace

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I like the flow of this track. The beat is bumping to keep the head bobbing. You did a really good job with the production on this one. My only constructive criticism would be, less talking and more rapping. If you wanna talk, it's better to do it in the intro or in the outro. This way you'll have a continuous flow on your track. There's always room for improvement, but that's what keeps us growing as artist. Continue striving and good luck with your future endeavors. Good things come to those that never quit.

Hey. I checked out your song and it’s not bad. The issue with the song is the quality and mastering . If you were to get your song professionally mastered I definitely believe it would make a major difference.

Love it that song is cool trust me it's sound great keep going you will do it trap baby that's the way it is nice job fix the instrumental better with your voice bit keep the same flow halla

This is my honest opinion of your song and in no way am trying to offend.. First off the quality of the song is not good. Sounds really low bit rate mp3. Seriously low quality upload. The Rap voice is good and the flow is ok but nothing fire here. The synth keys are dope and had alot of potential but the beat can't pound out with this low quality transfer. I like the idea with the lyrics of seeing past the current mainstream trash that's shoved in our face on the daily but this didn't quite deliver the solution. Keep at it.. You got what it takes but just isn't coming through as of yet. Peace and Blessings..