I think my honest feedback will kind help some of your content or the way you spit this lines... It help to re-record the same song as it helps a lot on how you going to tuckel this harmless beat and kill each and every line. Take your time coming to your final product... The air you take to spit a line must be also aligned with the beat. So the more you listen the more you rectify

You're very good lyrically and you speak many words with a wide vocabulary. The music was also uniquely created. I enjoyed listening to this song a lot. Just wish I could hear you better. Great job overall.

This your creation and idea. In my opionion its not my style of music. You sound like that rapper in the eught ball.movie. Get ur own style of rap. Nit grammy material. Better luck next time ha.

... I mean, damn, what can you say? I’ve never heard a more authentic stab at truly making your own niche and sound in any genre of music in awhile like this. Sure, you hear new styles and improved trends of the same old out there, but this is pushing originality. Meshing and trying to create a style from thin air ain’t easy. Hate using tags and labels but if I had to try (and probably won’t be very accurate) I’d say a jazz like instrumental vibe with a strong Eminem type flow and delivery. Jazzy but modern mash up in the vain of old school pioneers like “freestyle fellowship” (not to be compare to) with maybe the ingenuity of ”Sage Francis”. I respect it purely for the artistic creativity, it’s not exactly something I’d personally rock out but like a few other reviewers mentioned. If a hook and identifiable verses could be incorporated somehow within the instrumental sample flow for the everyday listener, could really have the start of something tight and unique. The vision and talent is there but would probably have to be refined and dumbed down for the masses, if that’s even what the artist is after...

First off, great compositional strategy. It's a tough scenario to go fully Independent, with quality composition and/or beats. The arrangements, the mix, all dope. Vocals, seem a bit off. I'm really no one to give criticisms, they just seem off. Levels are all over the place. The flow, I can hear the flow, the talent is there. Maybe work a tad on delivery, or breathing. Not sure which. Honestly, I envy the truth of this cut. Content and substance are both there. Keep diggin' ... I feel like in my heart, you're an Artist to keep and ear and eye out for. Much respect.

I like what youre doing here. This is something I can play when I'm in this type of mood you know. I appreciate you skills as an artist keep it goin my guy. Now when I say keep it going I meant KEEP EM COMING!

Keep up the good work if you happen to have any trap beats you should post some up so I can checc it out I need a good beat maker so if you down to work just hit me up with some beats bruh foreal and don’t forget to checc our my music anytime you get the chance I got some hot shit for the streets lol and oh yeah if you know how to make some turn up beats you should post them up as well and I like beats you can rap about smokin too so yeah if you down to do business checc me and out and hit me up bruh

It’s a mouth full, I really don’t know what to say about this, All I can say is this music it’s for everybody there’s no hook what the fuck is you talking about it’s a format of making music This ain’t it fam keep practicing you have a nice flow but you sound and rap like Em find your style and stick too it

Yoooo what's good brother.... I definitely think yu have talent. Slow ya bars down yu dont want comparisons.. ya heard.... no my problem if yu not ola stop violating.. ppl died for dis shit bro... n when kan do sumthin I'm open

I like that you stay in a different lane and focus on staying unique keep it up man the beat goes hard and flow is for sure stylish positive and on point keep it up and stay blessed and hope to hear more.

The beat bro is trash.Your lyrics sound like they have substance. But you got to get your breathing down right and cut the breaths out of your mix. I think you need a little better mastering too..Also throw a hook in there or interlude to fill up the blank spots whee there is just a lot of instrumental.

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I was impressed that the composer used cadences in such a graceful, fluent manner, while keeping the melody choppy and fast. was impressed by the way the deceptive cadence took this piece down a whole different path than expected.

This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

This is a very nice track you have here... I really enjoyed the beat and the lyrics are very original and complex in a positive way... u have alot of skill and talent just keep doing what your doing and when you find your sound you will know it... keep grindin!

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I can really feel the music in this and it dies speak volumes to people who are going threw something in this world its uplifting music to the fullest I can say I like the fast flow also one love