Great concept and on point. Just a better track to fit the vibe. I'd rap it up a few other tracks if you can to seek a better fit. Nice well written song. Maybe your producer should make the beat to your lyrics instead of rapping your lyrics to a beat.

wow nice some hip hop AWESOME what a beautiful ..........VOICE and iove the way it was sung ......................love the way the vocals are done.................this song has a really good melody lines.......................the backing vocals are amazing the way they were collaborated.................... ...simply were amazing cant say enough the way they were sung.................the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on........................ the vocals had a perfect pitch..................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you....................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again...........................

I like the vibe but it is difficult to hear your vocals you may want to look into turning those up. I like that you talk about something real that seems like happened to you which is a great quality to have especially as a man. Keep it up

This song is great as it will most likely and unfortunately relate to many out in this crazy world. I for one can relate to this track. Very well put together and just overall great. Hope to hear more from you soon. SOB ThisLife

Nice beat, slow but cool, vocals have reverb in them, slow rap with tone, it's ok, the production is very good, the mixing 8s professional. Talented I recommend it. It's a slow song sirt of like a ballad in hip hop rap if There is anyway I can label this. it reminds me of some other rapper but I can't remember whom, maybe you ought to listen to this and tell me who he reminds you of. All in all its a cool song to listen ti

The music fits the artist's style of raping, but there is a discordant sound to the whole track. Perhaps the piano needed to be in a different key. A song should be progressive in it's arrangement in order to keep the listener interested, if not it dies of repetitive use of one chorus or verse. What makes a song great? The way it makes people feel when they hear it. Be it the verse, rhythm, or flow of the song, Whether you are bobing your head to the beat, tapping your feet to the groove, or just singing along, how we feel when we hear a song is important to the success of that track or the success of the artist.

I like the sound you produce my guy!... I actually enjoy listening to those kinda tunes. So please do stop making this, you got it the right way... one day i wish i would see you going big stages. Big up muh Dawg. The story you tell there is amazing, I feel you for real.... BRAVO my G. Continue with that.

This Beat is hard with all that Base..This a cool song i fucks with it ...you should've just been more aggressive ... Check out my shit too..Just Google King Skinny Its Finally Written everywhere

Intro alright. Great topic. Great music for healing. I know it took alot fa you to make this jam i know you dropped some tears. Good rap style. The beat nice. I heard yhat dog bark in da background. I feel ya jam.

Hey man, how you doing? hope you doing good. I was going through my N1M reviews and i got interested in the title of your track. I like the beat you have there and how you ride on it, It shows you been doing this and bigups for that. I hope you grow and get better production wise. If you feel like you need help with the production hala at me. i like to work with artists from different places.

damn! sorry it been a while. lets start by the beginning!! the instrumental is good but i wont lie the bass should hit harder becuz i barely feel it with the piano!! but the otherside its make the song ez to listen!!! wont cause ear fatigue!! your flow is good , nothing to say about it! the ad libs are good and make sense!! i noticed you didn't autotune!!! but i can feel something on the hook!! real good!! the song is a story telling!! listen a couple of time!!! good job

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Yo man the message is powerful nice concerpt, beat choice on point! You nailed the track with no hammer but lyrics... In love with the jam broh no doubt keep up the good work that's impressive big homie ????????✌????????

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Bro your lirics are fire trust me as you keep on the good work in your pen and paper and also even pressing harder on your recording and master you are in it to win it, its all in the matter of time and consistency. Music is a journey make yours with pride because it all starts low and grow until fans see the glow, keep building and bettering yourself bro and also believe in yourself coz that's where it starts.

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