Like the intro sounds, your vocalizations and chatter seems heartfelt and natural. Track comes in nice, I dig the vibe and Your flow comes in real smooth and your lyrics are good, discussing hardship and difficulty and struggle. This is really relatable music. I think you could make a great video with this, and think it will fit on plenty of hip hop playlists. Got a real old school but not dated sound. Keep working man.

the intro is dope!!! the whole mix is perfect, sounds like music i can hear at radio,heat homie nice n smooth you got a video to this one if not u should shoot one homie mos def feeling this Albert Einstein “Music is a language that doesn’t speak in particular words. It speaks in emotions, and if it’s in the bones, it’s in the bones.” ― Keith Richards “I think music in itself is healing. It’s an explosive expression of humanity. It’s something we are all touched by. No matter what culture we’re from, everyone loves music.” ― Billy Joel “One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.”

wow nice some rap AWESOME what a beautiful ..........VOICE and iove the way it was sung ......................love the way the vocals are done.................this song has a really good melody lines.......................the backing vocals are amazing the way they were collaborated.................... ...simply were amazing cant say enough the way they were sung.................the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on........................ the vocals had a perfect pitch..................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you....................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again...........................

As im listening I already like how the song start the quality of the music sounds clear. I come across so many songs that are really distorted. And you are very articulate I can understand your words clearly. And I like the vocals you really spitting fr. Where are you from? I'd like to follow and keep up with your music. I like how the music has a story line behind it like it's really coming from the soul. Thanks for making great music can't wait to hear more.

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I like the beat, and t he sounds that have been used are kinda cool with a sort of change in the speed which gives it an interesting result, the rap is ok however it seems to me to be out of tempo, maybe it's this way on purpose but not sure, there is some story telling also with other vocals and they seem to blend in nicely, overall I give it a 7

Honestly this is some of the best underground bars I've heard for a minute. The cadence needs a little work but your flow is on point and you got a natural voice for recording. And there's a story to follow. I approve homie.

Overall this was a dope track and the vocals and beat sound great. I would say the music production could be a little more clean but overall I love your energy and message and that's what stood out the most to me. Keep working on developing your image and delivery and I really think you could take your career to the next level. Keep up the great work and god bless man!

I love it its different but your words made me listen , keep doing what your doing . I'm not going to lie I hit replay ???????? .......ain't no way that I'm going to figure this all out so why stress!! I.m listening ????????????

Alright intro. Rap style is urs. Beat is alrigjt. The message is good. Not grammy material. This track is kinda old school. The hook is alright. The track is ur own style but you askex for a reveue. Or is there a hook or was this just freestyle.

Wow what a cool joint u cooked over thre n damn i may say the song is the boooooooom son,thumbs up ,nice artwork u made thre .ill make sure i share and spread the word to ma people about the song

Bro your lirics are fire trust me as you keep on the good work in your pen and paper and also even pressing harder on your recording and master you are in it to win it, in fact you gat it all n its all in the matter of time and consistency. Music is a journey make yours with pride because it all starts low and grow until fans see the glow, keep building and bettering yourself bro and also believe in yourself coz that's where it starts.

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really really like this tRACK.ONE OF THE MORE INTERESTING ONES ON HERE . tHE ATMOSPEHERICS CREATED BY THE Hypnotic backing track really sets the tone for the vocals. The rappers timing is right there ...always .his flow is smooth and right to the point, between him , and the beat evreything falls into place , and especially like the intereaction at the end of the song too , another real winner.

Nice, smooth, calculated flow. Gr8 content, too. Much needed break from the b.s. keep grindin, my G. Warlockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

what it do tho!! your track is fire tho,u got a trap type of vibe!!! keep yo head headed toward million dollar dream because hataz gonna hate but true skill is in your art your musicc!!! god bless & keep bringing that fire!!!

heat homie nice n smooth you got a video to this one if not u should shoot one homie mos def feeling this 1 fwm beats collabs etc lets work You on spotify etc if so send melink i follow you etc salute keep mashing respect Lets work homie respect

it's Twenty-Kay Lyrical-Killer ZA here from South Africa and I would like to say your music is magical keep up the good work never give up I also love the recording part as well your quality is on point

I like your message the flow delivery is perfect yes this is a good song it feels good it’s understandable self reflective with the song being that good I would tone the language back a bit but over all good track

Very Cool beat, And great job. Im really digging the lyrics and flow on this. That second verse with the kush line is ????. I'll be definitely checking out more stuff you post for sure. Keep doing your thing