Good lyrics , id say just work on your flow and delivery more get this song mastered better its really nice and relateable its real you can feel what your talking about ! No lie i like the song

I love the message and the smooth beat compliments your flow The delivery could use a little work tho Sounds like its rushed just a Lil Keep up the good work I'm looking forward to hearing more from you

I really dig the concept the way you talked about something other the usual such as the gang bang type and drug deal etc. Although I come from that era it's refreshing to hear someone take a different route. I salute you and keep doing your thing.

Introspective Track that many Young Fans know nothing aboit this is the kind of Music that Kendrick and J Cole are making and thats Real Music. Dont be afraid to go deeper in the Lyrical Content you have the Ability to Mezmorize Minds with lines the hit you in the heart or mind each time i hear you going into that successfully some artists need more work than others you are on the verge of that.

Finally some real Hip Hop to review on here! There's a lot of people doing it all wrong but every once in a while a gem is discovered. This track came close to having the complete package of a perfect Hip Hop /rap song. The beat and vibe was golden era and the Rap flow and voice was on point. The instrumental was accompanied by ambient sound effects and overall created the mood for a true banger! The lyrics were abstract and storytelling without the use of profanity and typical mainstream dialogue. This is real art and I genuinely enjoyed the listen. Would have gave it 5 stars if there was tight record scratching turntablism involved as well. Overall this is the best song so far I've encountered on this site to review. Peace and Blessings in Jesus name .

dope dope dope dope dope great dope Great song, good sound and please never stop doing music you might become greatest musician ever. I know making your music to be on top of the world is not easy because am also a musician, it takes hard working to be on top of the world so work hard, grind hard even if it seems like your music is not gonna work, even if life is giving you hard times, you are true gifted, you are real talented Bless up Hope

This track is nice. It has nice jazzy blues type beat flavor and sound to it. Vocals and lyrics are also nice as well, along with the story line. Other than a few lyrics being off sync with the beat tempo, everything else is fine. This track has the potentials for moving up the chart. Looking forward to more releases from this artist.

We love your style keep up the good work. Good sound!!! Much love and Support from Untold Secrets Entertainment music Network in Riverside, CA AATOK is an Artist with in our network. check us out on Facebook and soundcloud.

I was just speaking to J dogg up out of Oklahoma telling him his song was too long, and he damn near thought I was sneak dissing. I got mad respect for what your music is doing on the n1m team. Everybody ain't hot though. Your production especially is great. How would you like to flow over a few West Coast samples? You can download each of the quality street music tracks predominantly on Reverbnation under SplitEndz The Profit here in Los Angeles.

This joint reminds me of when I was younger and in harder times, wondering what was going to get me from one day to the next. This is the type of song that would play in my head while sitting on the front step, looking back at those times.

Very personal joint, gotta flow it a lil better but I like delivery , true story so I fucc wit this positive joint. Ganksta G I wonder about that name , where u got it from ? Good story line and all , need work on flowing and pushing it out. If this a true story God bless u cuzo always keep worcn it's Dope concept

I really love this artist because i love his flow and i love his lyrics he's a really great artist he has very good points in his lyrics he's very serious about what he's talking about and he's very straight forward with what he's saying in his lyrics i am an artist of the Christian Rap genre but i always really love & enjoy discovering new artist of the same genre or similar genre of mine i always love and enjoy listening to new music

The beat is mellow and the flow is not aggressive but the flow is a little fast for the sound. You tell a story which is nice, but I would choose different production or add to the beat. Your flow is consistent but it needs some energy in it. The hook should be giving me a little different feel then it currently does. The song does have potential and a possible audience that will appreciate it, but I would revisit the alignment and work on the mix. Keep working.

I never knock no ones creation of style talents and introduction. I listen and i heard and with no doubt did i here you and your productivity, its a stretch and i know your 1 of a kind just keep on developing that sound and you'll find your own lane. 1 luv APD

I like it, I think you could tighten your flow a little bit to where it lands more on beat, but I like your message and the beat you used. Practice makes perfect so keep doing you. God bless you!