Lay Me Down At Heavens Gate
Song Reviews
thought i already reviewed this
great guitarin an vocals..honest music..the words mind put some people off.. it's the same chords over an over..and that's a good thing. the chords are good. this dude is a top muisian more power to him. dont think he's ryn to be famous or hava 2hit" watever tht means..tho the words would prob make that impossible anyway. that's just a guess like..i dunno. i aint no reviewer..just tellin me iv no coins for the bin. good music...guitarin is class. nuff said.
Ireland, Dublin
Lay me down
wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/05/21 Rossi Francesco EHM Italy House Electronica Alternative Messaggio Spirituale (Spiritual) 03:50 Alternative Rap Rating: Messagin ...wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 10[signature] + 10[helpful] = 50 05/05/21 Erik-Peter Mortensen United States, New York, New York Classical Film Music World Set me as a Seal upon thine Heart 03:01 A Cappella Rating: Set me as a seal ...wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/05/21 AMALA United States, Illinois, Chicago Pop LEAVE IT ALL BEHIND (c.) 2020 R. Fogelstrom 03:23 Country Pop Rating: Leave it all ...wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 10[signature] + 0[helpful] = 40 05/04/21 John Anthony Saucier Canada, Ontario, Stratford Pop Country Rock My Dream (My Tunes Volume 3 Track 7) 03:53 Pop Rock Rating: My dream .........wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/04/21 Diallo Gazali United States, Nevada, Las Vegas Hip Hop Cheat Codes 02:37 Hip Hop Rating: Cheat vodes .........wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/04/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock MAND0LINS IN THE WIND 03:02 Pop Rating: Mandolins in the wind My fear friends Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/03/21 Dynamite Daniel United States, Flushing Progressive Christian Rock Love Me Or Loveth Me Not 04:15 Christian Metal Rating: Love me ............wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 10[helpful] = 40 05/03/21 Horus Angel United States, Hawaii, Kauai Acoustic Soft Rock Alternative Rock Forevermore 03:16 Alternative Rock Rating: Ffg forevermore ............wow what a beautiful song love the sounds and muscianship............this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over............they the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the guitars, drums and keyboards were played perfectly...............can't say enough about this song ............I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you.......... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/03/21 John Anthony Saucier Canada, Ontario, Stratford Pop Country Rock Love Me As I Am (My Tunes Volume 3 Track 6) 04:03 Pop Rock Rating: Love me as iam ..........my brother john another fantastic song.............you sound perfect for this tune and you are in key............i have heard alot of your songs and this one rates one of my favorites,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,you have a knack of song writing and melodies are really good.............what else can i say the musician ship is great.............i want to thank you for letting me review your songs............this is steve d...... from voodoo dancer............... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 0[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 20 05/03/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock ERA IL 1982. (IT WAS 1982) 03:35 Instrumental Rating: ETA il My fear friends Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/02/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock LIZARDS IN THE SUN 02:45 Piano Rating: Lizards My fear friends Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 05/01/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock IO TI AIUTERO' (I WILL HELP YOU') 03:33 Singer Songwriter Rating: Io ti Iutero My fear friends Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/30/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock MAMBO LATINO 02:33 Mambo Rating: Makbo Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/30/21 The Donna Walton Gospel Network United States, Mississippi, Jackson Christian/Gospel Christian HipHop Jazz "Shadows" by Gayla James 04:45 Easy Listening Smooth Jazz Rating: Shadow Wow 5 STAR ON THIS SONG AMAZING this reminds me the music is fantastic .....the sound is amazing I truly love the melody line it has a beautiful flavour.......it reminds me more of the nineties songs but with a little more groove.......... The vocal sounds are really good and uptofate...... I would definitely recommend this this song and shar it with my friends on my Twitter and facebook account.....I want to thank this artist for letting me review his song I really appreciated......this is steve from voodood dancer thank you again..........great vocals and harmonie.. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/29/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock PROXIMA MUSIC 03:46 Experimental Rating: 5 Proxima music Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/29/21 Robert A Green Jr United States, California, Stockton R&B Christian/Gospel Hello/cover by Robert A Green Jr/originally by Lionel Ritchie 04:06 R&B Rating: 4.9 Hello ROBERT GREAT JOB Wow 5 STAR ON THIS SONG AMAZING this reminds me the music is fantastic .....the sound is amazing I truly love the melody line it has a beautiful flavour.......it reminds me more of the nineties songs but with a little more groove.......... The vocal sounds are really good and uptofate...... I would definitely recommend this this song and shar it with my friends on my Twitter and facebook account.....I want to thank this artist for letting me review his song I really appreciated......this is steve from voodood dancer thank you again..........great vocals and harmonie.. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/29/21 Robert Meloccaro United States, Rhode Island, Warwick Jam Progressive Rock Psychedelic Rock The Otherside Of Tomorrow 06:27 Instrumental Progressive Rock Rating: 5 The otherside Always impressed ..... with a great instrumental song ............what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/29/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock ISLANDA ( ICELAND) Film Music Rating: 5 Islanda Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/28/21 Larry Rogers Canada, British Columbia, Maple Ridge Folk Acoustic Easy Listening Fade away 04:08 Easy Listening Rating: 5 Fade sway Wow 5 STAR ON THIS SONG AMAZING this reminds me the music is fantastic .....the sound is amazing I truly love the melody line it has a beautiful flavour.......it reminds me more of the nineties songs but with a little more groove.......... The vocal sounds are really good and uptofate...... I would definitely recommend this this song and shar it with my friends on my Twitter and facebook account.....I want to thank this artist for letting me review his song I really appreciated......this is steve from voodood dancer thank you again..........great vocals and harmonie.. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/28/21 The Abbeystills United Kingdom, Edinburgh Pop Velvet Sunset 04:42 Pop Rating: 5 Velvet sinset Wow 5 STAR ON THIS SONG AMAZING this reminds me the music is fantastic .....the sound is amazing I truly love the melody line it has a beautiful flavour.......it reminds me more of the nineties songs but with a little more groove.......... The vocal sounds are really good and uptofate...... I would definitely recommend this this song and shar it with my friends on my Twitter and facebook account.....I want to thank this artist for letting me review his song I really appreciated......this is steve from voodood dancer thank you again..........great vocals and harmonie.. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/28/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock RECONDITE ARMONIE (HIDDEN HARMONIES) 02:46 Instrumental Rating: 4.7 RECONDITE ARMONIE (HIDDEN HARMONIES). ...............Hello again my italian friends........you guys are gifted by god to write this beautiful songs let me rephrase it beautiful songs.......this is another classic from you collection just love it inside and out........ the music is so relaxing and beautiful i can sit down with friends at a lounge and listen to it over and over i can be driving on a journey and listen to it i just love everything about it..........what else can i say yo guys impress me..... love the musicianship........ i want to thank you for letting me review your amazing songs and songs well done steve from voodoo dancer................. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/28/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock NOTTE DI LUNA (MOON NIGHT) 03:30 Happy Hardcore Rating: 4.8 Note de luna lways impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/28/21 John Anthony Saucier Canada, Ontario, Stratford Pop Country Rock You're The One For Me (My Tunes Volume 3 Track 14) 04:12 Pop Rock Rating: 4.8 You're the one for me ..............My dear friend from Canada you. Never seem to amaze me...........this is a 5 star song to my ears........the guitars are really good your vocals fits this sd song perfectly...........the melody is very catchy........I can hear this wholeson while I'm driving on a journey or just sitting at home smoking a cigar with some friends.............the muscianship is excllented.............I really dont know what else to say keep up your great songwriting my freind and thank for letting me review your song steve from voodoo dancer..................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/27/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock GIUDA 03:25 Breaks Rating: 5 Giuda Always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/27/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock I NOSTRI ANNI PASSANO (YOUR YEARS GO ) 03:17 Jewish Rating: 5 Inostri always impressed again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/26/21 Diallo Gazali United States, Nevada, Las Vegas Hip Hop Gentleman and OG ft. Mobbin David & Fttp 04:36 Rap Rating: 4.9 Gentleman .....rap techno haven't heard rap in such a long long time but this song called gentleman..it has little groove going on ..... love the synthesizers and the waves going on through the song ......the flute sound really good as well I really dig the groove a little of Jethro tull with the flute.........I want to thank this artist for letting me review this song.......love to hear what else is up his sleeve I'm sure its all really good..........this is steve from voodoo dancer. .... ............... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/26/21 craks(wyte owl recordings) United States, South Carolina, summerville Hip Hop Just a thought 02:18 Hip Hop Rating: 4 Just a thought ........rap techno haven't heard rap in such a long long time but this song called just a thought .....it has little groove going on ..... love the synthesizers and the waves going on through the song ......the flute sound really good as well I really dig the groove a little of Jethro tull with the flute.........I want to thank this artist for letting me review this song.......love to hear what else is up his sleeve I'm sure its all really good..........this is steve from voodoo dancer. .... ................... Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/26/21 artemisio e loredana Italy, dalmine bg Instrumental Country Pop Rock CURCUMA E ZENZERO 03:12 Ambient Rating: 4.9 Curcima again and again ......My Italian frends what else can I sa just beautiful.............this is another one of the best instrumentals I heard on this site................it is very easy to listen to it's like bring on a journey ..........I can listen to this driving long distance and or relaxing at home smoking a cigar..............the melody is stuck in my head na na na na wow just love it...... I want to thank this artist for writing this song gave me a smile thank you ...... steve from voodoo dancer thank you again........ .........I just love you guy and ing stuning beautiful music and well written............. Blincoins earned: 20[review posted] + 10[300+ characters] + 0[signature] + 0[helpful] = 30 04/26/21 Robert A Green Jr United States, California, Stockton R&B Christian/Gospel Be Anything 03:27 R&B Contemporary Christian Rating: 5 Be anything Wow 5 STAR ON THIS SONG AMAZING this reminds me the music is fantastic .....the sound is amazing I truly love the melody line it has a beautiful flavour.......it reminds me more of the grest R&B songs but with a little more groove.......... The vocal sounds are really good and uptofate...... I would definitely recommend this this song and shar it with my friends on my Twitter and facebook account.....I want to thank this artist for letting me review his song I really appreciated......this is steve from voodood dancer thank you again..........great vocals .....
United States, New York, Middle village
Religion
Very personal song if you believe in God . It could do with recording with lighter guitar sound . It's not really my thing but could hear it being played in church or at a worship gathering
United Kingdom, derbyshire
Heaven's gate
Very beautiful song thank you JC your song is very inspirational I enjoyed listening to it. Please continue to write and inspire others with your music. ???? lay me down is beautiful in its simplicity
South Africa, Cape Town
Lay Me Down At Heaven's Gate
Soulful vocal with timeless tale of reconciliation and comfort for Jesus to take us home to Our Father. Slow tempo keeps us focused on the vision you are creating. I like the graduation in the guitar riff. This is not my favorite of your songs, however, it is a great message that many need to hear now. Come to the Refuge! Come meet Jesus and He will restore your Joy. Quantum Solace!
United Kingdom, Chepstow South Wales
Unique sound.
JC always bring a unique sound. On each song he brings another unique sound. , and thats whay even the song is basicely simple it atracts my ears. JC makes alote of repetitions in this song which emplify trhe subject: knock on heaven's door. you can feel the knocking in the music eventhough the music is very mellow and soft. I can feel the prayer out of a broken heart, because JC use a small voice in this song and this make you be excited about this beautiful nessage even more. I love it!
Israel, Jerusalem
GOOD SONG
very good song, my congratulations. I like it a lot, you have a lot of talent. Thank you for sharing your music, your creativity and your talent. Keep going. Many blessings. Long live rock and roll.
Peru, lima
Needs More Work
Lay Me Down At Heaven's Gate was just too repetitive for me. I would suggest adding a chorus or bridge which, I think, would improve your message. Also for the mix, you may want to add some reverb on the vocals to enrich your voice. You have a passion, so keep on working on it!
United States, Florida, Palm Coast
02:56Lay Me Down At Heavens Gate
Please keep writing music for the Lord as out nation needs it desperately now! Please keep writing music for the Lord as out nation needs it desperately now! Please keep writing music for the Lord as out nation needs it desperately now! Please keep writing music for the Lord as out nation needs it desperately now! Please keep writing music for the Lord as out nation needs it desperately now!
United States, North Carolina, Stanfield
ballata
ballata un po' scordata e stonata anche ripetitiva che va bene forse cantata in osteria con gli amici peccato sia un po corta ma per divertimento si può' fare tutto specialmente con un bel bicchiere di vino ma puoi migliorare
Italy, dalmine bg
Nice work
New music up on page from Sick O Supa(No Take Backs). New video to the song Party also, click the video link on the song. Thank you so much, we appreciate the great fan support and we ask that you spread the word and share our music and we will try our best to continue to give you the best music we have to offer, thank you again.
United States, Indiana, Worldwide
Lay Me Down At Heavens Gate
Not trying to be rude but this song needs to be rewritten and recorded. It may help to collaborate with an experienced song writer. The verses need to be punched some and chord progressions are to simplistic to be interesting. I wish I had something positive to close with but I'm afraid I don't.
United States, Indiana, DeMotte
a work in progress
sometimes you have to overlook the imperfections to find perfection. if nothing else this song is a good start at building a better song. The acoustic guitar.sounds good. add a little compression and the strumming would sound much smoother. The vocals on the other hand are out of pitch from time to time. you can hear there is a lack of force from the diaphragm pushing out the sound. I would recommend an autotune on the vocals and then to try resinging to the autotune. some singing lessons would also help with learning to control the diaphragm. The song has a lot of room for arrangement and could even handle a verse or two
United States, Illinois, Aurora
Heavens gate
Okay, that strumming pattern needs changing apart from being the same monotonous, although nicely played strummed it doesn’t evoke any passion desire or emotional reactions. You need to concentrate on the listener, you’ve got an indisputable good enough lyric in there JC but you’re just not doing anything to promote it. Where’s the sunshine and the rest of the Sunshine Band. Your vocal is okay at least it has got some sort of tune retention and ability to keep in tune, albeit a not so confident tone and it’s a bit wavering. That said you could do with more help, you’ve obviously got a good facility to do recording so maybe get some back up vocal harmonies in there you could do that yourself but you probably should consider another lead vocalist and to then see if you can add some low amplified background harmonies and vocal compliments to that. Think about adding some percussion too. The song has some really interesting potential but it honestly sounds a bit incomplete.
United Kingdom, Bridport, Dorset
Lay me down...
I thought it started off a bit slow and really needed to up the tempo of the song. I hope this helps? Apart from the start being a little bit slow, it was quite a good song lyrically. In my opinion, I could listen to this song again. It was really easy listening
United Kingdom, Blackpool
JC Lay Me Down
Needs a lot of work, the recording value is on the lighter side with a need for more effects. The vocals need some work. the song could be a good song, but this might take more work than you thought. Hang in there and keep working hard at it.
United States, New York, Cortland
Blessed
Thank you for allowing me to listen to a great song I also Christian song my favorite Music is Christian rock gospel and gospel rap I love all types of music but my favorite music is blowing find Jesus Christ through gospel and Christian music continue to make green music continue to uplift our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ with your gift thank you for sharing your talents and gifts with the world and me may God continue to bless you in all your endeavors each and every time you make music I would love to hear it please keep me posted on any new music that you may have coming out or send me the info where I can download your music God bless your wonderful day to God be the glory
United States, California, Every Where
Up straight artists Mr hamarich AKA David Crawford say up to the flipping world my friend I like your music very nice song up straight to the next level good condition I am interested in your album to buy it on n1m
Good morning my friend up straight artists Mr hamarich AKA David Crawford from Clarendon Jamaica artists from move up record i amazed hearing you chat some good music blessings my friend keep it rolling in and out make sure you are writing More good songs because I am interested in listening to More of your nice song I like your music very good condition up straight to the flipping world
Jamaica, Clarendon
about your song
yes i think it is fantastic lyrics are fantastic music is also fantastic singing is also fantastic so all of it is fantastic Although i am in love with the percussion and i think putting it in this song will be fantastic but hay that is just me it is fantastic as it is there are also 3 people here hearing your song we all think it was fantastic well done so i gave it a top rating may GOD BE WITH you and family friends so on bless you in JESUS CHRIST name take care in him
Australia, Warragul 3820
