aight my guy. the production was like A-1! but then you jumped into your verse and its lacking a lot of delivery. i cant even hear you rapping because you're not matching the actual frequency of the beat. Keep pushing keep grinding..

Turn the effects down & vocals up a little. You actually have a voice under all that & nice flow & concept. I think that if you made that minor adjustment you would probably do really well on anything that you did. Good job keep going

This sounds good from the start. Reminds me of some old school thug shit. Some deep rider shit. I got time today so I'll check out more of your work but if it sounds like this then your shit is going places well done I like it

Yo MKilla..nice beat but it seems like you should have got to the hook of the song sooner. Every great song has that strong hook thats catchy and I did hear that in this song. Don't take it personally, I receive constructive criticism all the time and thats how I build and create better beats and hooks! Keep doin what you do...it will just make you better and better. peace....Cidy

Salute keep putting out that heat ???? they can't stop us from being dope this is our super power the power of words indeed they are mightier than the sords or guns imma holla when im in that neck of the woods GDot chsmusicgroup. Who can stop us ???

I actually like this track because the simple fact I'm from the hood and I flirt with death daily..but the message the artist is bringing across is real and that's what moves me most. I like the beat, Its a banger, I like the ad libs and all that. The chorus is nice but what I like most is the message that the lyricist delivers in this track. I like how he articulated his words kept a steady flow. I like the fact that what he had to say speaks to me and many others. So I encourage this artist to keep pushing forward. I support you and the movement as an artist myself and listener.

Real shit soon as I heard dis beat I said woah he better panicked! I'm a huge fan or creativity as well as originality.... yu definitely displayed both on here. Great production!. Keep ya foot on dey neck brother!

I am a artist myself,your style was on point,your chorus was in line with what you were saying.I appreciate you allowing me to review your material,the pleasure was all mine.Stay Blessed cause you are.You have my approval.

Like the verses really the whole format an style you got going only thing I really can say needs work is engineering mixing leveling you know things of that sort gets other ppl attention when it is all crisp but you sliding

It’s real talk in the streets everywhere if I can close my eyes an picture it that’s what u call real music creative minds working in these cold cold streets gotta keep the Real Alive the youth must know the truth these streets ain’t Sweet your best friends can turn your enemies in the streets for the love of money is best to know the truth then to be false lead by the fake STAY WOKE

Nice the intro was very hard like that old skool rap..that we smoked and ride to coming up in 90's I would drop it WORLDWIDE..I honestly as a music EXECUTIVE,WOULD PUT THIS ON RADIO FAST..NICE TRACK.

The particular use of the keys caught me immediately carrying a dark tone easily catering to the listener, it might not speak to everyone but it certainly caught me. As an advocate of free expression I must note that lyrically there's a place where those feelings existed for me a time ago but that time has passed, however the vocals are spot on regarding delivery. Mix-wise it's always nice to minimize/edit the "smacking" picked up by condenser mics, but I could only hear it in the intro. The use of the (delay?) effect on the vocals sounds a "little" overdone unless the intention was for an ominous tone, either way I could still hear the vocals fine. Overall this song is well executed as is the mix. Don't stop writin'!

What's good yo that's definitely a nice song fasho and that beat is a banger the only one thing I would do is turn your vocals up just a lil bit but other than that nice ass song frfr keep grinding