I like the originality of your work. Strong message and creativity is a big plus. Good production, I can hear some good vocals to this, good job on the final mix-down. I can tell you have your heart and soul into what you do. Keep on pushing and never give up or get distracted in pursuing the dream of making it. I like the instrumental blend of sounds with some vocals and the production on the track is good. Keep up the great work! Peace!!!

I am so glad that I read the lyrics first, both in English and in German. I couldn't wait to hear how you would pull them together musically. Great job! Wonderful passion in your singing and the melody is perfect for the lyrics. This is so delicious to listen to, even for those that do not speak German. The guitar is spot on and doesn't get in the way of the lyrics, yet it fills in musically without need for any other instruments.... What a skill this is! I just want to hear this passionately sung song, again and again! So well done. Obviously, a seasoned and professional musician. I hope that many are getting to hear your talent. If you are ever in Texas, I want to know! Going to go check out the rest of your songs on n1m. Thanks again for requesting a review and so glad I listened, and that you gave both sets of lyrics. My German is a little rough!

This is surely some alternative soul food, the strumming of the guitar sets the tone and leaves a melancholic feeling that talks to the soul, I have also acknowledged the changes made in several parts of the song and the way you sing the song says that you have totally brought into the track you have a wonderful song and the instrumental behind it complements it very well

The two chord pattern reminds me of Death Row, a blues song by I don't know whom but even used as a movie soundtrack. Simple but effective. The lyrics of your song are presenting some of the basic questions in life where I spontanously don't have precise answers to. But I guess the song doesn't want to give answers but rather make people think about their current position, and this works in my case. Only thing to mention is the massive reverb on the vocals. At least here on my poor laptop it is a bit hard to understand the lyrics in the faster part due to this effect. Less would be more here.

The voice is charming...scratchy, low deep tone. Really beautiful. Sometimes not completely controlled...some singing lessons would help... To me, the piece is interesting at the beginning...but I really feel the need for harmony change...I think insisting so much on a couple of notes can create an intense atmosphere...but I also think at the end you should give something more than speed up the rhythm The recording is not so bad.

Love the vocals, sounds like Falco and I love Falco!! The only thing I can hear that could be tweeted a bit is the mix itself, if you get this mixed and masters you will have a very relevant radio track!! Very good!!

A very smooth and creative Melody of song I love the intro the guitar I love the way you started the song and ended it you have a great Melody I like your voice very unique and creative.. keep on making wonderful music keep on sharing your gifts all over the world cuz people need inspiration and times that we living in today hope you had a wonderful weekend enjoy your upcoming weekend and have a blessed Christmas and a happy and successful New Year remember to keep God first have a wonderful day may God continue to bless you and all your endeavors peace.. stay in touch God bless

Very relaxing . Also exciting and vibrate. It takes you on levels. The arrangement was supremely dope. I call this feel good music. It almost reminds me of meditation music. So if you’re just relaxing around the house…throw this on.

I can Predict a great amount or creative ways of writing songs ahead in your adventure. What a Great Song. I really like what you did with your talent. clean all the way through. Reminds me of young Bruce Springsteen.

Greetings, Thank you for choosing me to review your work, I count it an honor to be included in such a task. My hat is off to you and anyone willing to step out and share their gift, talent and love of music to the public. Be it a musician, singer, song writer, actor and so-on. I myself, via 40 some years of experience in the fields, on the road, in the studio, radio, TV, video, and management, consider myself to be a seasoned musician, singer, song writer, studio-sound tech/engineer/ owner/operator, stage manager, find it sometimes hard/difficult and perhaps not even fair to sit in a seat, voicing My Opinion concerning another's creative efforts. Especially in certain genres of music I am not all that familiar with concerning very important elements that make up and meet the required standards to justify the various levels of ratings and grades. So, in saying ALL that, I will limit myself to MY Opinion concerning the quality of the work according to My ears, and the standards I have been familiarized with thru-out the years. I hold to the old - saying " Beauty Is In The EAR of The Beholder ... LOL. The sound quality of the recording over-all is very crisp and bright and clear, Consider backing off the processing on your vocals a little , not singing in a tunnel, more natural sound, but, not dry and flat either. I really enjoyed the message, energy and arrangements, in this song.Think about a music solo break to step away from vocals for a short period in future works. Vocals are smooth and natural, sort of - down to earth as they say, and extremely peaceful. The mix levels let me know who was still in charge of this song. Very easy to sit back and listen to. I mean no offense in any part, I myself take all feedback and use it as a tool toward my next project. I pray you feel the same way. Either way, I say to you, keep doing what you do, keep kicking and enjoying what you do. I tell folks all the time for many years. When it stops being FUN, then it's time to stop, and stand back and think about what we are doing, why we are doing it, how we are doing it, what we and others are getting out it. Is it what we want, and how we want it. IF NOT. what are willing to do from there? Thank you again for asking MY OPINION. Johnny

O.S.T. Oliver Sachse Tenky ©® Singer songwriter review. amateur demo Nice low key flow. The voice is in the background and the guitar accompanioes the singing nicely The song is complete, has a great potential and should be re-recorded in a studio. :)

the song stayed in one place i was waiting for it to grow and get bigger with more vocal changes but the vocals stayed in one place so it got a lil boring after listening to it the entire song. the voice is nice but arrangements need help for sure other than than that i'm not sure how the german music scene rates music but over here in the states of america we are a lot more critical hope this helps you.

The intricacy of the acoustic riffs are pleasing to my ears and the tempo changes are effective. The vocal phrasing is effective and fits the rhythm patterns. Since I am not fluent in the language the lyrical meaning is lost to me. The chorus sections could use at least one harmony voice to separate the melodic change. Enjoyed my listen. Thank you jd

buona voce che si cimenta in un pezzo un po complicato ma carino nelle due parti melodiche arrangiamento normale per la canzone divisa in due parti anche con ritmo diverso il cantante o cantautore ci mette la passione ma sicuramente con un pezzo migliore di questo e con la buona voce che ha di sicuro risalterà' meglio nelle sue doti vocali con la canzone giusta migliorerà' il tutto

I have no idea at all what he is singing about..German ..I dont speak German..but it is a great recording the tone of the guitar ...the melody ..a very cool song ..it says he is a punk rocker ...I dont get that from this song..I cant totally put my finger on it ..not country but not blues ..it feels like great rock of the late 60's.. soul full gritty and full of heart...two thumbs up.

song..............AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and ........ over.............................this the song was put together well is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals and guitars are spot on the drums were played perfectly........................... i can't say enough about this song .........................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank so much to letting me review your song you..again.************...............

Love this artists voice, although i dont understand Verman i feel his music in my soul ... great song. Great acoustic version... i wonder what it would sound like with some african drums in the background

Adorei seu som, muito bem produzido e interpretado. Os arranjos me encantaram, quando puder mande mais trabalhos seus. Espero que goste dos meus trabalhos musicais, sou compositor do gênero samba. Grande abraço!

This sentimental ballad is emotional. The German language is interesting and used in a particular new way. The rhythm fast country is easy to remember. I think that this song could have a very positive result.