I don't know whtat where this is going and it started out on the wrong foot. The beat is raw but you don't sound serious because you didn't take the time to wite the lyrics and be creative enough to make it a real song. This can be something real hot if you sit down with it and give the song some foundation and structure. If you don't take your work serious, who will? Good luck bruh!

Your delivery needs work and try to switch up your flow from time to time, it helps alot especially when you convey that confidence in your delivery it intrigues people. Mixing was bad straight up straight up because I'm not even sure if this track was mix and mastered because it doesn't sound that way. The mic you used didn't help much either, best thing to do is to in a decent condensor microphone it'll do your vocals justice. I know this review might seem harsh but if those elements aren't there it means your track is incomplete.

Its a nice beat and I like the fact that you tried to talk about something different! But you need to work on your delivery, and flow. I really was kinda bored while listening to it.... It was nothing special about it to be honest

The song is good. But, i noticed that your lyrics sound like they are just thrown together. I can foresee that you put little effort into this track. Take time to work on your talent have discipline and don't rush. Much greater potential I see in you.

Im feeling the concept of this song but the mc delivery is not structured enough for it with at this it was a little off but i can tell you can rhyme if you put your verses together correctly peace.

i like the instrumental, but the voice it needs a lot more editing, and i dont know if its from the micro but the quality is not so good, and also the instrumental needs to be a bit higher and maybe add a chorus so it makes the song more complete!

Im not feeling it bro, but u have so much potential that could become something enormous.

Cool song but delivery needs to be tighter. And too many curse words for the type of song your doing.It has much potential....

I love the idea you are trying to relay but your lacking consistency and delivery in your flow which takes away from the song. You should take the time to write and get out the message your trying to relay.

It's not my style but it seems good. Voice is good. Well recorded but a little heavy. Peace Aira Winterland Brazil

Sup, They say a track should have impact in its 1st 60secs & unfortunately yours diddnt including the quality of your recording,please work on that and God Bless you in your future work

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When I first heard it I knew where they got the riff.Its from RKelly. A lot of times with music we hear the pros make it sound easy. Like anything else work ,work ,work. When I produce a track for anybody it has to be committed to memory as far as your lyrics.I thiink you have to go in and re work the lyrics. No continuity. Mixing to many different thoughts that kinda clash. You have to be mindful of the listener. Re-work it.

nice modest tune , a bit heavy on bells and percussion but a good style. Well recorded. Hulk City

Its straight for just a freestyle

not bad for a freestyle do ya thang lol.... Its A Bonus

Your flow doesn't hold itself steadily, but you definitely did have some flashes of brilliance in there. You used intricate vocabulary and it was really good for a freestyle. I genuinely enjoyed it and I liked the beat too. I have just one song out on this site, but I feel like we can both learn from each other. Listen to my flow and you'll understand. Plus improve the quality, but i still liked it.

This is lacking in production, it sounds as if you have put a cassette recorder in a room to do this.

I think you need to put some more work into the song if you really wanna compete against the best artists in the rap industry but you r sounding good though but i think you can sound better if you work harder

Good work for a freestyle session...BUt imaginee what you could do if you really sat down wrote some lyrics to a good beat ...Try it some time , super effort..