could use another step in the guitar trip vocals are ok...drums come in very nicely melodies arrangement is very good how to counter act the romper room mood in parts of the lyrics can be like sustaining notes or something....not just the opposite mood abruptly if you know what i mean???? good job

I really liked the intro but it doesn't later have anything to do with the song that follows. I would decide what to keep ..the intro, then work on a song that is inherent to that or the song with another kind of intro that suits the style. I really thought it was all about "world music" but i realised that i had misunderstood.

not sure about the intro!! rest of the song is ok though. I would have mixed it differently but not bad at all.

Buena musica amigo sigue asi!!