mix is a bit mushy, and the vocals a tad bit off at times, but great song and great melody. Guitar solo fits the song. all in all great job!!!

l fuck with this

Good song. Sounds similar to some of the old Kinks vocals. Great musicians backing you up. Guitar, percussion, backing vocals all sound great. Lead vocals a little shaky but nothing that can't be cleaned up in production. Good luck!

Reminds me of Matchbook Twenty and Stone Temple Pilots. The vocals are shaky at times, but not enough to make the song not listenable. Kin of repetitive at times, but an overall good song.

Very corny and unimaginative sounding. Pitchy vocals, and overly melodramatic.

OK, this get going pretty good after the first minute. Remember that you must hook the listeners in the first 3-5 seconds. I hear you trying to build momentum throughout the track. This can be good BUT if you loose the listener in the first few seconds it doesn't matter. Nice lyrics. Love the background vocals

Nice lyrics, and great backing artists. Good voice, good rendition all through. Reminds me of another song, by Christopher Cross "Sailing".. Be careful in case the use of certain chords in a certain sequence can be copyright issues. I would not want you to lose out on a your song ! If it passes muster Great! I wish you all good luck!

Not my type of music kinda of dry to me besides the chorus. Great sound mixed far as recording and studio quality this is very good

I like the hook. The lyrics are cool. Great job back up singers. The beat is nice especially at the bridge. Overall good job and good luck.

Hi, Not my favourite kind of music but it sounds very professional. Easily listened song but I think that's the point if you classify your music in pop/rock. Great song for radio stations. An excellent musicianship that's what I want to say at the end ;) Big Up

I think you need a lot more work on this track.

Every review I do now I look to see what guitarmandan has said. He sugar coats nothing but is usually on point. So don't be offended, he does everyone that way. I like what you got in a song composition but it needs practice. The vocals are weak and loose pitch and some of the lyrics come off awkward. Practice will solve that. That is the only thing I have found that separates the pro from the amateur, how much effort they are will to put into practice. Once you do that, get back in the studio and record this again, and tighten the mix. I know that's easier said than done but its what's needed. Peace

Good story line for a movie. Sounds like a lot of work went into this song.

Can listen good flow with melody and vocals, not my style, but it listens well done.

some backing vocals at chorus(on and on part) would benefit mix a bit mushy, indistinct solo is wimpy and so is tone would go well tho on a Donny Osmond hit not bad for a wishy washy pop song good job!