This is an interesting song that you've done here. It is in the bare basics that you've presented here and the overall quality of the recording needs quite a bit of remixing. You can get a better sound on your vocals by dropping your high end (treble) off a bit to eliminate the real high squeaky ring on your voice. You may look into getting a compressor or compression software that would help you get what you want in your voice. The piano is nice and could use a remix as well, just to get the time right all the way through the song. As a rough demo to show what you are thinking on the song, it achieves that totally and is a good way to simply show someone what you are trying to write. Keep working on this and you may find a good song in there! Good luck moving forward with your writing.

Anima. In questa canzone io ci trovo l'anima e anche solo col piano si sente continua a fare queste canzoni che ti fanno sentire meglio e falle ascoltare agi amici e parenti ma anche qui nel nostro sito qualcuno ti capirà

Fajny numer bardzo przypomina mi David Bowie, delikatny nie rozciągnięty i przemyślany z fajnym tekstem myślę ze będę obserwował twoje poczynania, i miejmy nadzieje że takie kawałki usłyszy wiecej uszu na świecie

Hi Amala, Thanks for submitting this song. I can hear the tenderness in the vocal performance. It really needs to be more in front of tue piano. You could add a reverb at about 6% just to make it stand out a little. The vocal has a good amount of grit to it, and for me that gives it color and brings the rest of the piece to life. The piano could have been a little mire active in the more energetic parts for emphasis, but I think that's up to the producer. Overall well done

good morning shy town I grew up in Chicago on the Southside just got to listen to your song very unique song Thank you for sharing it with sorry I took so long thank you for being creative and unique out of all the other artists. Keep on sharing your music never stopped creating a writing grade music. Once again thank you for sharing keep me posted keep on sending me music for me to listen to have a wonderful day and enjoy your Sunday and enjoy your upcoming week God bless..

All I will say that much.. is never a good idea to send out a demo in progress..I know what You are trying to do but in order to make something happen The Recording Must be Radio Ready Quality.. if I be You.. I will invest some mony to record that song..but all Must be better.. Arrangement .. Vocal and Recording Quality.. I do like the Lyric but I will work more on Melody line.. and when all is done send It out.. as It is now .. You do nothavemuch chace to be pick up...Good Luck..

One of the things I enjoy most about Number One Music artists is the newfound ability to hear music from around the world by singers who I'd never have the chance to listen to otherwise. That, in itself, is a great thing. Here, with this song vocally the microphone effects lend this to sound more distant - perhaps that's intentional. The piano haunts the melody in remembrance of a time long forgotton. Passionate.

I'm digging the sound of what you've got here The mix could possibly do with some tweaking. But as a mastering engineer it's something I can nitpick over all day. The track itself is really good. I'd love to listen to more of your stuff. One of the sections of the song that really impresses me is the catchy verse. It really grooves. There's also some great rhythmic components you've made that I'm finding really captures my attention. I'm excited to hear where you go when you come to working on more tracks. Thank you for sending me the request for the review good luck.