I like the MIDI 8-bit feeling of this whole thing, pretty sweet. But I think you could stand to add another element, like a guitar or even another synth line. Especially between verses. As for the vocals, they're idiosyncratic, not a really well defined melody, which could be OK, but it just seems a little meandering. It seems to me like "Green Realm, My heart is your Heart" is the refrain, which is super cool, so it might have be a good idea to change up the accompaniment there to emphasize it, maybe even put the intro bit underneath it but add some bass and drums. The ending just kind of trails off as though you didn't know what else to do, it would be nice to hear something a little more conclusive. I think there's some really good potential here, and a really good idea or two, it just needs a little development. Keep at it.

I found this song pretty personal, sounds very indie, and I liked the sound like a 80s arcade game. I miss some efects like reverb or delays, I think they fit well in this kind of song.

I don't know that I'm the right person to review this song. This is not something that I would or will listen too. With that being said, I am sure that Andre Lotter has fans that love what he does so I will leave it to them to review his material. Good luck with your music and in all you do.

For a short time intriguing, but the longer it takes the more the electronic music is getting irritating. Synth volume is sometimes too loud. Few song dynamics. Song structure and chord progressing is too simple (for me).

I'm sorry man, but this is not something i would usually like. The instrumental is too unprofessional, the melody is kind of missing, the song is too simple, also I don't think i can call this "Rock" music. maybe that's your style but there is only the lyrics which the listener ignores because of the music. I now people who maybe would like it because it's different and very alternative, but I told you my opinion. I'm sorry, I'm going to give you bad rating. Good luck with everything, Donnie Donkov

Bonjour J'ai essayé d'écouté mais je me suis ennuyé c'est pas mon tripe je suis désolé , c'est très minimal en terme artistique et la rengaine au synthé virtuelle est très désagréable , la voix est lancinante et ne propage aucune émotion je mets trois parce que il y a un travail de compo et d’arrangement , bonne continuation .

The song sounds like it's on a loop track which takes away a lot from the value sadly. If it was changed a bit it would honestly help out the quality and sound and enjoyable to listen to. The song is good as far as the lyrics.

This song was very different like nothing I've heard before which is a good thing. I did however find that the song did a lot of repeating of keyboard parts and I got lost in the timing a little too. Cool voice but I think the song structure needs a little work. Not trying to sound negative but just my opinion on making this a little less repetitious and possibly add some more instruments to give the song a little more definition.

Nice effects at intro. Too much time on the same thing. Groove is very static. You had a good idea,that could be up beat, but you don't develop it. Could be much better than it is.

I have to say I have never heard anything like that. Seemed like it repeated itself. Maybe try expanding on what you are doing and be more creative....

good riff, keep the good work, meanwhile listen to our songs here www.youtube.com/humancycle , thank you, best regards

hey I dug the intro, and the kick in of the bass. the vocal melody needs to be defined more, and try some differen't plugins, a good stereoizer or chorus will thicken it up. The kick drum could use some punch. Try a compressor will give it a nice little punch. Think another part should kick in to differentiate the song. the bit without drums later on is cool but should come in soone, maybe switch those two back in forth and add one more part.

This song is a very strange one.It says it is a rock song but I would not dare to put in this category. It is more electronica than anything else.The main problems with the song (which there are many) are firstly the voice which unfortunately is not even in tune. It doesn't fit with the music which has obviously been done on a home studio. I'm afraid this kind of song will never be heard due to the fact everyone with a computer in the world is capable of doing this.This kind of music is the reason so many real talented people are finding it hard to get there music heard. If you are asking people to review this I would be careful because you may get alot of bad response. I would advise just showing this music just to close friends because they will tell you what you want to hear.Sorry but don't give up your day job