Overall your delivery on verses was good I like your versatility in your delivery. Keep grinding and getting your point across thru music. If you ever want to collab message me on my music page

We all have had a issue where someone has lied to us. Its apart of the game and happens daily to all those in relationships, on jobs, among friends, family and it tends to be something that can spiral into something that can cause anger, pain, destruction, fighting among whoever you dealing with at the time. It pays to be honest. Thats why I like this song. Its realistic and the lyrics are nice as well as the beat. I encourage people to listen to this and take heed into the words displayed more then the beat. Not taking anything away from the beat but the lyrics are the main ingredient to this track. I encourage the artist to keep pushing and expressing realistic words in every song they bring. I support you,

I can see you work in hard I dig the lyrical content the beat is dope to so u kinda coincide well I dig it I fukk with the trakk keep working somebody will hear u trust and believe u on the right trakk

I'm loving the production. I honestly feel as though the first verse was rushed, the second verse was definitely all the way even with the few stumbles. The hook needs more energy. I like the song, just feel like more time should have been taken in post production. I hope this is not taken as hate, its only feedback. Hope it helps..S1

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To be totally honest 4914 killed that Shit. And no disrespect, but the guy on the hook and the first verse shouldn't have been on the song. Once again no disrespect. I get the concept of the song and all that...I tell us what. Hit me up for the remix.

The beat is very good. I would say the verses where not practiced enough. Seems like you really didn't have to structure down packed. This song definitely needs a mix on it. Doesn't sound like there is any effect on the entire song. The beat was the most entertaining part of the song. I trying to get into the lyrics but it was kind of hard when the vocals were kind of in and out. The hook could have been a little more fuller also. Keep working and youll get better.

verse 2 kills it. as for verse one, sounds like my first recordings. its a lil rough. the flow seemed like it was written to the beat but at the same time it sounded like it was written elsewhere and used for this beat. eitherway verse 1 had a positive message and does have content. the flow sounded like you were holding back or it was your first rap song recorded. im not hating. id like to review a newer track. we all start somwhere. hope this helped. keep recording, and use compressors and equilizers on your vocals that makes a huge difference.

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Diggin the concept. Refreshing in theory. Definitely need to work on the mixing and mastering. Id play with the levels and bring your vocals down a bit. Also i think yoyr flow could use more swich ups to make it more interesting to listen to.

The thing I like most about it, is that the track is different. I think the beat should have been a little louder to merge the lyrics and the beat as one force, and of course the chorus. The song is about something we can all relate to, cause you know everyone is trying to get paid, it's hard times out here. The flows are pretty dope, and I can see this track being on a soundtrack or something like that for sure. Keep up the good work homie.

I love it I think that you are doing a great job.. You keep up with the good work.. And god will lead you to the very top we should do a collab 1 day

I like the potential you have....make it count coz everyone tryna do the same thing over and over gain. be different be genuine and master your craft. I'm watching this space!!1

(first verse) Your flow is dope ,but your off beat and it sounds like your reading your verses off the paper ,GOD BLESS Second verse was cool but stumbled a lil.

Very good vocalizations and Bar arrangements. Complete with top notch studo reverb and great bass feel this song is sure to win audiences over globally. Much continued success to you. Keep on keeping on.

This track is hot no question, keep putting out hot shit and I Believe someone will come searching for you To sign you and your group No Question about it at all

Stay workin on your craft you will get better but you on your way stay diwn u will come up that track cool 4914 was spitting a lil bit yea yall stay at it

Keep up the good work ..................... .

I've been writing a good minute & I can tell you guys just started making songs. The record was ok. Not horrible. Not Great but ok. Advice I can give is. When you go into your verses create a story listeners can follow about your chorus. Felt like I was tring to figure out what was goin on. Also try to feel the melody of the beat to make the lyrics flow versuse it sounding like you're just talking over the beat. Keep pushing it can only get better. I sell beats also @ www.midikong.com

im really feeling the way the song came on.. keep doing your thing.. I like it. check out my single in iTunes http://itunes.apple.com/album/id1028112203?ls=1&app=itunes