I think this song is cool I like the hook I like the verses and the beat. The producer is nice on the beats, the first rapper has good rhyming skills I think his style is dope. The second rapper has a dope rhyme style too. The flavor is hot.

Different your music is rap with rock! You have your own style and I see where you going with it keep grinding you will definitely get there. This is unique and I like the way it compliments. With the rock music.

This is a nice hip hop record with some positive content the production sounds pretty clear. Nothing that stood out though. The hook was pretty entertaining but you could hear the flaws in the delivery. And it sounds like he was reading . The other guy on it was pretty cool as well. He gave me a killarmy feel..i can respect that. Over all the song was cool.. Would listen again. I suggest memorizing your lyrics.. And sound confident on what you wrote. Cheers

I think your song is interesting to say the least. The clarity is definitely great. You have a very unorthodox style. Its even off beat a little, but what you are saying is cool. definitley hip hop though so good stuff

I like the message in this song people who listen to lyrics and need uplifting and need some courage telling catzs you get one moment so when its you time get that ishhhh the production fits the song nicely not overproduce flows well catz need to cop this single tell the story but also live the story also.....

Beat is banging. Way to spit it from the heart great attitude and flow ,,,, keep up the great work. Keep chasing your dreams and live for the moment g

Your vocals was on point bro. I wanted to finish the song all the way thru. I like the fact you Harmonized with everything. I bet you can kill all types of beats. Keep up the good work,.

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First off, much respect for doing what you love homie. But, I have to give you some constructive criticism that can help you improve as a song writer. The first thing that stood out to me is that the flows are off beat. It almost sounds like you guys wrote your bars to a different beat or not to a beat at all. You guys are either using too many or not enough syllables and they never match from bar to bar. Count your syllables. Thats how you emphasize matching syllables on down beats and snares. The hook, it was a little generic my dudes. Just didn't really evoke any kind of emotion. It was just too simple and I would think about adding a bridge to break up the hook-verse-hook-verse predictable song structure. But keep doing what you do and stick with it and keep getting better from track to track. That's what this is all about. Good luck homies.

I was in a group with an artist who rapped like this named Delirium. Everybody said he was off beat and couldn't rap, but I thought it sounded good. I was hoping to hear some weed music when I saw the cover and Colorado having recreational use of marijuana, but I guess this wasn't the song for that.

I like that its very original i never heard that beat before. I like that your flow is different, but you need to be a little more on tempo. Your studio quality also could be a lot better. Quality is a big deal i go thru it myself it sucks! Especially when your doing it yourself. The second verse rapper is a beast. He needs to headline more tracks. The ora the swag of the song is good just those certain things stand out drastically. And always say who you are more than once, Until you become known by voice!

solid hook fam no lie. i think you should make it bigger tho, like more layers/ vocals. its a great hook, make it epic. (first rapper) feels like your chasing the beat, you be on but sometimes you flipping it like a little rushed. your bars are hard, as a listener a couple breaks in the beat just to emphasize your point. (second rapper) yall styles the same and yall sound good together. solid track

I like tha vibe but to be honest I think you got tha rite mind jus need to find a better flow it take me in a world but somehow tha flow sound off beat but you'll find your flow long as you keep it up

Honestly I think you should find a beat that compliments your flow. I heard the lyrics and a was like dude talking about something but o think you should have a doper beat and release the beast.

This could really be a good song if you had a good producer behind you to put the song in the right direction. For example: The lyrics and be improved a bit more by pronounceating some words differently. Also some of the lyrics can be replaced with other words so you can get words out instead of rushing the words out before the chorus is over with. Once again the song could have potential. Keep up the good work. For beats by:Brandon/B-Mac visit https://m.soundcloud.com/bmacofficial Or http://www.impulsemusicent.com/#!/c13jg Or email officialbmac@gmail.com

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Nice original lyrics with a powerful message...with a great illustration for a story delivered by a nice collaboration from two MC's...very different feel and sound...keep up the great work!

Surprised me when the verses came in, I like it a lot....keep at it bruh, all it takes is the right beat and the right night writing your best lyrics to make it big..