joyful sounds in the sample; good the rapping; i like the arrangement; but in the song there is no something really catchy, really huge;when a melody or something in the song keeps the mind of the listener , it is the most important thing, because he then say “i buy”; you can improve this aspect to create something more great, more impressive; good luck and keep it up

greatest beat! lyrics are ok vocals are good and the mood is very good too

The first thing that came to me after the initial words is that this is the first time ever i'm appreciating the DICTION !! Very good work of production, placing of the voice and arrangements.

Good production and how nice to be able to understand the lyrics (often a problem with rap). Nice balance of vocal and instrumentation. You might want to work on another ending though, as the fade-away is passe. Fine job generally.