The vocals are non-existant can't make out what you are singing about & to me the lyrics are the most important part of a song. The music must be great as well to get a great song. Needs a total remix to hear the vocals. Keep working & trying don't let anyone tell you that you aren't good enough. I mean my review as honest without being mean about it. You have much promise.

i couldnt really get into this one but it is an easy listen i could see ridin to this one and just daydream

I'm giving this one a little bit better than half because the music is "soothing". I listened to it last night and it put me to sleep in my chair. {Ha} But the VOCALS are the drawback...as there are lyrics there, but so FAINT you cannot distinguish one word from another. {And I don't have bad speakers.} I just "now" looked at the other reviews here and they mirror my remarks about the vocals not distinguishable. Surely this is "not intentional", but the product of a not-so-professional recording. {I KNOW...my band has many like this. HA} If you can find a way to BRING OUT the vocals from the music...you've got a WINNER here! Either thatl or "remove" the vocal tracks altogether and just leave it as an "ambient instrumental" would make it nice also. But LEFT AS IS would be a "tragedy"! Keep on rockin'. Southern New Mexico ===[NOTE]======== Music is in "all of us" and "everything"! Just as people have a PULSE, a heartbeat...nature has it's own "rhythms"...it's a UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE! I wish we as a human race were "not" categorized into colors, races, etc. Same for music! -- Certain "beats, sounds, rhythms" ATTRACT US like a magnet, or repulse us like opposing magnets. It has "no" bad reflection on the creator of the music...just "personal" preference due to a variety of humanistic reasons...sensory, mentally, physically, emotionally! -- When we categorize we put LIMITS on ourselves! -- I try and keep an "open mind and ear" to what is going on around me. Perhaps it would be "better" to list musical genres with a preceding "WORLD" whatever, or "UNIVERSAL" whatever!? That way would better clarify if you as an artist were trying to capture a "commerical" audience {WORLD} or "art for art's sake" {UNIVERSAL}. THINK ABOUT IT!

Sorry guys but avantgarde is something different. Production is not well done. Are there vocals? Maybe. Not my cup of tea. One point for honor.

This song has the vocals way in the back & can't understand what the singer is singing about very well. The music seems to vacilate between beats slower & faster slightly that takes away. The drummer needs to redo the drum track as it is all over the place, the bass is not punchy & tight with the drums. Nice singing & song I think I just can't hear it well enough, to buried, to me the vocals should be up front totally in the mix.

I think the others reviewers didn't understand that you buried the vocals under the music on purpose. And I find it a very nice idea, something like Mogwai do on their songs. This makes it sound like a floating harmony, something soothing and very relaxing. My only critic goes to the leading acoustic guitar. It has a really artificial, robotic sound. Did you record it digitally? I think you really should record it with a mic right on a real acoustic guitar or in any case make it sound more natural! :)

Nice tune, but can't understand the vocals. Might want to up the volume in the vocal area. The vocals do sound good. Nice guitar work.

there seemed to be a wall of sound from the guitar which seem to hold back the vocals causing conflict

You had me up to about 28seconds when the song shifted downward in my opinion... keep it uplifiting and higher and i think you'll have something...add a killer hook too for the chorus... guitar needs to be intonated (solo). I love your voice! Is this a male or female? Very cool voice..