Vocal production could be used here. Light tuning, distortion, some compression (especially for hook). Synth could be louder, more distorted and gritty. Wish drumset had more punch and bite and stood out from the mix. Also wish bass was bigger (can again distort and compress). All elements could benefit from reverb, especially the synth and pad. The pad also could be louder. The more "background" the element, the more reverb and your sound will sound like it shifted into 3D.

I was really impressed and so surprised with this song. I've heard some of your other music but this song seems different. I thought this song had a really good sound and seemed well put together. I really enjoyed it

This is a great result of great lyrics combined with great music engineering. Solid recording and I can tell you put your best into your music. The producer also did a great job putting the instrumental together. Great job crediting the producer. Listened to this track in a music studio session and we were jamming for about 20 minutes before hitting the booth. Solid records fam. Great job and keep up the good work!

It's good to hear originality and that is what I hear on this instrumental. The vocals and lyrics are really good, I know it is very hard to make music but I think it would be nice if you had another rapper with a smaller falsetto type voice like a hype man. But it sounds really great and you should not go off of my judgment this is just my opinion however I do like the sound keep up the great work

a Fellow artist of the truest form of hip-hop Boom Bap lay the canvas and paint your story G!! good job on this they say hiphop died....idt? soo hahaaaaa we here baby!!!! jeeeah def gotta collab some day fam saluuute

Very good boom BAP type beat Catchy hook and nice vocals this song can be compared to the late 90s early 2000s hip hop the Fugees Redman and Method Man Ludacris with similar sounds and cadences. I give this five stars

on the positive side you have the vocal upfront and clear. That is always important , backgrounds are a little muddy , and could be spread out more or isolated to one side . the rapper is pretty good , but nothing very unique. Now the negative . the track is generic as hell , and ends up being boring. It does absolutely nothing to add to the track...as a producer you have to blend all the elements together to create an interesting, and compelling SONG , something memorable that stand the test of time. My advise is start listening to real songs , and not just rap. Why so you get a much better sense of what a hit is , and what it is not..... Ultimately nice try , some very positive elements, but you need to expnd your awareness , and knowledge about music in general if you want to elevate yourself above the mediocre.

I listened to this song and it sounded very good for your genre. It was mixed and mastered very well also. The only thing it was hard understanding the lyrics, but overall the song sounds good

I'd like to be it sounds good song is on point good lyrics I like to delivery keep up the good work when you get a moment stop by my page number one music for Philly 2000 and check out the song for you please share like comment thank you very much have a good day

Ba-Kem's "Grill Dem" is a five-star hip-hop hit that doesn't disappoint. From the first beat drop, the listener is taken on a journey through the gritty streets of Mount Pocono. Ba-Kem's originality shines through every bar as he delivers boom-bap lyrics that leave a lasting impression. The track's rhythm and rhyme are expertly crafted, with each word and syllable hitting with precision. Ba-Kem's storytelling abilities are truly impressive, making it easy for the listener to get lost in the world he has created. The mix is solid, even though you say you are still learning. The breakdowns are placed in all the right places, giving the song a dynamic feel that keeps you engaged from beginning to end. As for the cover design, it is truly unique and original, which perfectly matches the vibe of the song. Kudos to you for putting in the effort to create something special that stands out among the crowd. Overall, "Grill Dem" is a hip-hop gem that showcases Ba-Kem's undeniable talent. Keep making music and perfecting your craft, and I have no doubt that you will continue to create memorable music that will leave a lasting impact on the listeners. Regards Dogz One

we like the way song start it has that wu tang feel to it the beat was good and the mastering and mixing was good and the rap was all good look forward to hearing next track keep up the good work

wow nice some rap/R&B/hip hop AWESOME .this song has a really good melody lines I can hear this song over and over.............................they the song was put together is very unique..........................just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on the drums were played perfectly........................... i can't say enough about this song .........................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thank you.......................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you....again..................