olá bill,parabéns, sua música original, do homem do campo,que fala da natureza,das coisas simples da vida, assim mostra seu desempenho, sem luxo, violao e voz, e alma coracao, parabens, quando buscamos sentimento no fundo do coracao, sempre teremos lindas, coisas a dizer

Smooth blues for a Sunday morning. Put the speakers up high and enjoy a great, heart felt musical journey. Great lyrics and a shuffling beat can keep you toe tapping to this beauty. Not all songs need big production, sometimes all you need is the right ingredients. Here is a great song delivered with heart and soul and voila, a great song and experience. Even better the third time of listening. Great stuff Bill !

This is an earthy folk roots rock original song, stripped to the bare bones, solo vocals and acoustic guitar. Husky voice over the driving rhythm wants to be heard, pleading for your ears. There is a lot here. The instrumental technique at times loses it's momentum when the striking of the strings gets loosely played on and open strings ring out. The vocal track could use some reverb effects and overall the recording doesn't appear to have been finished properly in the studio. The recording comes off muddy, no highs or balance, and some of the lyrics are lost. This can be addressed in the studio in the final mix with compression..If the studio does not address these simple oversights I would not return there. If this is a home recording, take your time, make the best music that you can. You are talented and there is something very good here.

Bill Cole and the Cornplanter nous offre une chanson folk énergique bien enregistrée, bien chantée, qui sort du pur coté américains surtout par la gouaille du chant, qui nous offre une tonalité qu'on trouve plus généralement chez certains chanteurs Anglo-saxons. Une bonne chanson, bravo

First off this is probably a much better song than this mix. It's as if Bill just hit record and played and sang direct to digital. The guitar overwhelms the vocal which in itself has way too much small room reverb. I wish I could have read the lyrics because any song about the earth reverberates well with me. I think Bill means well and I hope he can get either a better live mix or a muti-track recoeding so that he can bring this song together in a more cohesive fashion. Keep writing, Bill

Now that's feeling, great song greatly sung. It really says something taking you somewhere else, which we all need from time to time. Keep up the good work guys because we need more stuff like this.

The words and rhymes are clever and the chords fit well to create and overall good song, however the recording production makes it difficult to hear things as they should be heard. The performance is also poorly done. You can hear choppy breaks in guitar playing that shouldnt be there. Also the voice needs pratice singing the break it misses the notes. I think practice and a real studio would be worth it

Hello, Let me start by saying that I review material on the basis of how commercially viable the material is... can you pitch the song to an established artist? The other option would be you as an artist... which is either you like it or you don't. The overall idea for the song is a good idea..... I feel lyrically the song content could be more focused and you could come up with better word choices which would help define your ideas. If it were me I would listen to artists that you like and see how they approach lyrics... How they use words... phrasing and the prosody..... The thought of a single guitar and voice is always a good path to take... however in this particular version the heavy use of a compressor is very distracting and takes away from the message of the tune (as you focus on the effect and not the lyric). Also the fast pan from side to side in the stereo field does not lend support to your idea.. You can make artistic musical statements using effects but by doing so you limit access to other possible paths for distribution.. You have a nice start to a song. The hard part is to revisit and re-write. I hope this has helped in some way.... Good Luck... and keep writing! RW

Hello Bill your song is particular but catchy and I also think a bit of Blues Chord In there is to correct me the same as the Guitar because it is not done well the melody is catchy yes but there is something to fix. To write a traslato I hope and I have not made mistakes and have been able to make you understand what I really think of your song. Good Luck.

Easy going blues style tune with a good message, would be nice to hear this song interpreted with full band and horn section, more dynamics added and maybe a key change or middle 8 section added

Like the song feel it's taking me on a journey into the land of greatness love the arrangements and the instruments use specially the drums listen to the tracknowledgement fantastic feeling is more love

Returning back to the roots of country music is not as easy as thought. Now for country musician it is not quite as. Hard to learn to play other genres of music which is learning to use more cords within the basic three cords or four chord turnovers and turn around structures in a song. I maybe completely wrong but I hear musicians trying to back up a country singer and to make the music have anew sound and complicating the song structure. Right or wrong some songs need to be played as less complicated and straight forward. I believe these guys have a good song and talented .

UNUSUAL VOCAL STYLE VERY ORIGINAL SONG WOULD BENEFIT FROM AN ACOUSTIC VERSION TO A MORE FULL PRODUCED SOUND I THINK THERE IS SOME GOOD IDEAS HERE THAT NEED TO BE EXPANDED ON I COULD SEE THIS VERSION GOING DOWN WELL IN A CAFE SOMEWHERE