Wow how the times have changed from my times of singing gospel music the sung has a nice flow to it nice beat Cool lyrics all and all very nice good job you could maybe use a break in the middle of the song change the core progression and come back to it but other than that very nice

Carmine The Phoenix brings his message with passion and conviction. The words are beautifully crafted and brought out in a very compelling way. The groove feels like an urban track you could hear with most any rapper these days. But the vocal delivery is outstanding. I was surprised at the like-abillity Carmine brings to her performance. I listened a few times to catch as much of the lyrics as I could. I can see that track having a good potential for radio to pick it up. The way to improve upon this would be to get a strong record producer to help get the vocals recorded with all of this passion and excellent delivery and cut it up with a sung hook that lets the song breathe more. I think that would make it more welcoming to radio stations. But with or without that, this is a talented artist that deserved to be heard and I will be looking forward to hearing more.

I'am mot a fan of hip hop, rap, but have to admit that this is really good. The voice an d the lyric is outstanding. Also the music is Well done, the deep booming bass drum feels lovely and bring life in the music the keys floating nicley on the bass. The mix it's self is amazing, good automation in the tracks, are miraculously. This song has everyting to be come a great song. It gould be, ho it should be. Like i said fantastic number 1.

Thats a really good song bro...keep it going... when you wrap fish that looks really good on your part but she speaking some real stuff so definitely don't give up man cause I see you headed in the right direction!

Outstanding Beginning and end i enjoy the concept of the whole thing it was Good Bro thank you I really enjoy it never give up keep it up Excellent Job P.S. Stay humble Stay Blessed Because You Are Blessed And Don't You Forget That In Jesus Name Amen

This song was Banging from the beginning to the end!! There is nothing like that moment when you decide, For God I live.. And for God I die!! We are so happy you made that decision to accept The Lord as your personal Savior!! It's truly a blessing when He snatches the scales off of our eyes, because before that we are definitely "SLEEPIN"! We want to encourage you to continue to spread the Word of God!! Stay on the Battlefield Soldier! Be Blessed, T.R.U.F & Zion

Great song. This is what the world needs to hear. This song can really change lives. Being transparent on your music is also great. It can really touching and audience by you opening up to them.

That was greate perfect volcals perfect music perfect singing hip hop or rap i think you got a telent from the lord do follow your dream were-ever the lord may lead it GOD BLESS YOU your family freinds church and everyone may you all out there receive the blessing of eternal life healing blessing pefection so on in the lord i pray hill be with all of you out there i think christian songs are the best it is because GOD is with us leading inspiring controling our spirit through the HOLY SPIRIT well done this is why i gave you a top score becouse i honestly beleive the song and you desearve it.

I like the message in the song. Right now it's all about creativity and story telling. In hip hop today nobody is really creating the ability to lure the fans in by the story. Everyone seems to be either running people away from God or judging and condemning them. Blessings!

The instrumental was great. It had a nice tempo, up-to-date sound. It possessed a polished sound, great use of arranging the melody, kicks, hats, ect. The vocal strength was overall good. The delivery of the lyrics were great, but in the chorus it sounded like there was a slight break within the flow of it. The lyrics had a positive message. I could feel the lyrics, but I believe they can use just a little more emotions. Overall everything sounded great and had a nice presentation. -P.G Prophecy Fireproof Music Gospel

This is a solid song. I like the intro also it has a good flow. The beat sounds good. The chorus is good. The production is good. Lyrically its good also. I heard one flow issue that could have been tighten up but overall this gets 4.2 stars. Keep repping the kingdom!

This song is great. I feel the vibe. I would love to throw a verse on this . If it's OK send me the track with just a verse to Darrylhopewell@gmail. Thanks I love this song keep making good music

Carmine has a strong delivery and this song has a great message! When some people find out that your a Christian artist they don't take you serious.. They sleep on you.. Truth is they can stay sleep while we grind and continue the business of our father! Good work!

wow...I was outta breath just listening to this track...hooked from the top . Music was nice along great rap skills. i like your technique with the vocals blended well with a super message .I am glad i heard sleeping on Me ..Keep working and be successful , Be Blessed

I really like this song. You did an awesome job. I just wish I could hear your voice more in the mix. Lyrically you are an talented guy. I love the fact of how you represent our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Get doing this bro. You are needed for the furthering of the gospel!

The Music has a melodic flow that the youth of today find hot. I like the ideas expressed in the message of the lyric and am especially impressed with the flow of the lyrics. I know how important it is to reach the youth of today and how hard it can be to do so. It is as important to listen as is to be heard, so I applaud your ability to do both in expressing yourself in this track. Keep grinding...God will get the Glory as long as you let him have His way in your efforts to use His gifts and talents thru you. *Spirit2Spirit*

A GOOD SOLID TRACK! Well executed and produced. Great lyrics under a solid foundation of muisc. The melody and flow of the music fits perfect with your "Rapid Spit Fire Raping" ability. It sort of reminds me of Eminim, the way he is able to spit rapidly and vehemently. You goin hard bro! If i were you i would have this track mastered professionly to get national airplay... (I listened 3 times) Keep rappin for the Kingdom!!! **Music FaDa World** G.M.