I love the beat an lyrics good song cause will be home soon called you up lol Hi share this the world needs this thank you I really think this is a good song that sounds like you can be on the TV show or something check me out I like you

Nice to hear... This is an example of allowing yourself to fly. It's very hard to critique someone else's Artforms. I give an A for effort. This is such a Leap of Faith. I enjoyed listening. My honest positive criticism is to play close attention to pitch especially when singing the same notes in unison. Nice supportive tracks .also. Thank You much for sharing Your Music... Blessings :-)

I really dig the acoustic followed by the beats. The first voice seems like you are nervous to sing, because it doesn’t sound like your natural voice, almost like you are trying too hard or too timid. Then the beats became a little too varied, the added sound after the first chorus didn’t need the extra sound different from the intro less is more in that instance unless the opening had it too. As for the voice again, you may have just mixed it wrong, because it doesn’t flow with the rest of the song. I do like it but might I suggest another draft.

Yes I think is very interesting in a good way, I think the bare bones of the song is good, lyrics, arrangement and vocal but it is lacking a little bit of melody in the chorus and even in the verses. I love the keyboard sounds and the feeling from the song.It would be nice to hear more melody...Good job

Hello! There is a small Hindu atmosphere in this composition... The percussion score is interesting, and the harmonies let us travel far away. On the other hand, the singing, the voice, leaves to be desired: not enough posed and hardly just; That's too bad! It is better when the voices are worked together. Good... The main thing is to indulge in musiqque, right? As far as singing is concerned, perhaps it is the range that is too much in the grave register; I think it does not match your range "natural ".

This track grabbed me right from the start. Harmonically tunes inspired by modular syntheziser effects forcing the music constantly. Also the smooth accompaining acoustic guitar are very special, but the whole arrangemend is more various. The graceful chorus brings additionally emotions into the song. The lyrics in short phrases unleashing the soul and touching the heart. Overall good digitally mixing and mastering. All sounding really wonderfull. A creative composition by using mainly electronical instrumentation and effects is full of unconventional sounds what brings a hypnotically feel into the music. It´s a unique quintessence of contemporary christian and electro music. These recording can lead alone with sounds of melodies to emotions. Listen with open heart to the music and I´m sure, you will likewise add it. Let others know your recommendation.

This is not Your best song..The arrangement is plain..and vocal is also not the best..I think it is just a "work in progress" I will re write..re record .. start over with Much better Vocal..I do not think that Radio Stations and Music Publishers will jump on it to play it or take it for Publication.. I know that You are able to make it much better so take Your time and make it happen..and when You record. Please put more energy in to the vocal.. on this one I feel like You do not like to sing...I wish You good Luck...

Me gusta en general, pero hay cosas que me gustan menos, la melodía es un poco aburrida, la música está muy bien. En general todo suena muy compensado, excepto lo mencionado de la melodía. La mezcla de la forma de cantar y el estilo musical también me choca, pero queda bien. I like it in general, but there are things that I like less, the melody is a bit boring, the music is very good. In general, everything sounds very compensated, except the aforementioned melody. The mix of singing and musical style also hits me, but it looks good.

This wasn't at all the type of sound that I would have expected to hear from a Christian/Gospel music song...which is a good thing, because it makes you stand out in the genre. You are adding something new and different to it. The melody in the verses is kind of repetitive, but the chorus being different helps with that. As for vocals: work on hitting notes as close to perfectly in tune as possible. Even being a few cents off can make a huge difference.