Great topic to be talking about Christ and nice hook to go along with it I would say to get someone else to sing it and rock it out nice song ore words could be added other than that I liked it

You can hear some talent in the music. I really don't like the vocals. The effects on the voice are not good.

good song keep up the hard work

Strong powerful voice. Be careful on the long notes at the end of lines. You're inclined to go a little flat from time to time; nothing serious, but just be aware of it. A little vibrato at these points will help cure this. I think you have a good backing track but it's a little too much in the background...just a little, especially the bass guitar. Well done, I like it.

I really dig your voice, but other than a few spots its too much of the same. I suggest using texture, sensitivity and stutter steps to add variety to your vocs. You only use volume for emotion but after a while it get monotonous. The accompanying music is weak. Sounds like it came out of a box. The beat is too far back. The lyrics to me are corny. By that I mean, I don't know what you are trying to tell me. It sounds like a bunch of random clichés from church. There are some sweet spots though, the opening line is on point for me, the mention of the Father rather than always addressing Him as God is sweet. Of course that's my opinion, I could be wrong. But even if you keep the lyrics, the music needs more feeling and the vocals need diversity.

Powerful vocals. Reminds me of Jon Anderson of YES. Other than that it was a bit of a jumble. I think you should take it back to the mixing board and get the levels worked out. Vocals too hot, etc. Sort out the arrangement a bit to clean it up. Nice song.

Powerful voice! Liked the part between 01:23 to 01:38. Loved 01.53 to 2:04. The voice is very good, but sort of goes off the rest of the timbre at 51 to 55, Nice intro to 00:10. Great guitar backing! Nice chords at 2:38. On the whole, good mix. and Good luck :)

like the opening arpeggio should have kept that more prominent thru-out singing needs some compression and autotune snare is weak outside of the unnecessary Bible thumping song isn't bad production is sub par

I always point out first and formost, that I'm a Christian..but, they track is badly written, roughly performed, and mixed badly. I appreciate your message; this is strictly about the music itself.

Great music like the mix.

Keep making good music,