This has potential need some better mixing just keep at it sharpen te pencil more and more dont stop man beas there just like I said needs a little work no hard feelings bro I'm new myself so I'm just trying to help fam

Hardcore..... Love the energy in the lyrics. Talks real life happening..... Some things you can relate to deep down in your heart and some you just can't connect to, but that's what life in the streets all about right? Nice vibe!

Shits dope yo it gots this old school hip hop sound to it mixed with that demon shit im into shit like that keep up the work bro u you bound to go somewhere woth that sound shit much love feom the san antonio area

This song is really appreciated. The characters of the song are so auspicious and stupendous that I had to revolve it around motivated Repeat listening sessions. I automatically actually activated more than enough infatuation for this song. This song is really appreciated. The characters of the song are so auspicious and stupendous that I had to revolve it around motivated Repeat listening sessions. I automatically actually activated more than enough infatuation for this song.

I like what you have done here. Your bars are on point and the beat is ok. I'll have to keep a look out for more of your work. You got my attention. When will your next some come out. Try and let me know. Anyway be sure to check out my music n we will talk soon

I like it I can understand the message but I just feel the recording and mix could of been better but the song is a Great Song I like the Energy I see it as it is Ghetto Stories witch is music needed for the youth today a lot of the music to day is very misguiding an very dangerous for our culture that Guided us growing through them hard times in life the music made it easier we felt not alone an it gave us Strength witch got us all hear today after losing so many to these cold cold streets No Matter how much we ever gain in this life it still could never be the same So it’s up to US NOW We Signed UP for this

The quality of the song is really low and it's really hard to hear what you are saying. The lyrics aren't really convincing, you could do more. It's hard to understand if it's rap or rock and roll

This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

just finished checcking out the track that you did. was pretty good. best of luck to you in all of your future ventures! keep up the good work and best of luck to ya as an artist! also feel free to come and check out my music as well@!

The artist has a good flow and it seems like they are comfortable. The beat is different and i like that...the content is relatable and is detailed...keep perfecting your talent. Peace and blessings to you.

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I get the "Music and message" vibe from this song. I can feel the reality rap edge to this track and I can with the energy. There are some points that remind me of Pac and there are other parts especially with the music instrumentation that reminds me of "The Last Poets" with the congos and bongos plus the vocals and their range of sound and various frequencies and style of delivery

This song is a nightmare. Like literally sound quality & all. It probably would actually be a pretty good song if it was quality. Flow was decent as well as lyrical content. I would take down and redo. If you people to take you serious. I am being honest as I always am. My advice, hone your craft & invest in your product.

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Sorry for the late reply homie. The holidays been crazy round here. But overall I like it. The beat has that slow chopped and screwed Texas feel, and your subject matter relatable. Only push back I have is turn down the ad libs. Homie who comes in second is heard over homie rapping first. It's one thing when you're performing live but another when I'm riding in my whip or bumping this at home. Keep this up doh woes.

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Mixing quality is ok..... When was this recorded.... it sounds old. But over all it's ok at the most. Keep Grinding fam and you will find your sound I promise you. I had to for a long time and it's not easy

Yo yo yo this ya boi tornado da rittler and I just wanna say that I really like this song the beat is out cold I can definitely relate to the lyrics and the concept of this song good music is always needed