I’m really just trying to get these Blincoins get the promotion thing going trying to Lyft everybody doing it if you need a feature on your tracks just let me no I’m on that I don’t have a problem with nobody and ain’t gone say nothing on a track bout any nigga period we all out here to get money

Decent work beats nice I feel I could a little work lyrics just keep sharpening your pencil fam. Theres a few parts of the track that the singing could be tuned up but over all I will give it 7 out of 10

Nice I think this song is really nice. The whole song is well put together. The audio and production quality sounds awesome. You really did your thing on this track. I can definitely see your career going very far if you can continue to make this type of music. I love the fact that you show passion in your song and that speaks in volumes to the listeners. Keep up the hard work! You definitely have what it takes to go to the top. Good luck.

I love the melody so much, the rap made it so much better, I was really mind blown on how the melody and rap came together. Who made the beat, the producer on some other shit this song is so really good tbh

First of I hope the girls singing is hot..it's good to pay a session singer they are worth the investment. Chicago has a great musical recent history in particular in rap(see Kanye,Chance..and Common. With those lead-ins you have to represent to the level of expectations for Chicago hip hop..good concepts die in lazy vocals.a Detroit style Motown review of your music will spare harssh reviews like this.. increase your production values..and go forward with confidence.

Your song is dope keep on doing your thing don't let nobody tell you different keep on expanding arraigned very talented???????????? keep it up the good music you are work on your music it's like fire

It's a pretty cool sound but I feel like you should work more on your songwriting skill. The message is not that hectic, a bit relatable that's why I like it. I can easily learn the hook which is a good thing

That’s what’s up I can feel it right off the top I like the way her voice came in like the Creativity an the message he riding the beat that’s music speaking ya mind no holding back put it on the track Kiki all ways say as long as you’re being yourself they will always be someone who can relate so keep going full throttle you an only you can tell your story like how you would No Matter how close any come they could never be you.

Such a good feeling song. It made me think of when I was young lots of emotions flooding me nice flow and chilled vibe Oldskool rap feel with abstract sounds merging together to give off authenticity

This is just good music straight up. Feel good music and up beat. The genre needs more of this music. It'll benefit everyone including the youngins out here shooting and killing for no reason. Maybe they'll rethink and change their minds having some positive music in their lives. Just a thought. Anyway great job keep it up im interested in what you got next to drop. PEACE -DONATELLO

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Keep up the good work I hope God bless your music and plays favor upon you and I hope that everything works out well and I hope that you keep on bringing our Bangerz and keep doing what you Gotta do no matter who’s proud of you

The beat is alright. It sounds like u recoded it straight from ur phone. Thr rap section is alright. This is not grammy material. The hook is alrght. I dont understand the message. This sounds displaced and unorganized.

"When I was growing up, my dad had a beautiful calligraphy copy of the poem on his bedroom wall, given to him by his father. Before we could read, he would read it to us, and once we began reading he encouraged us to practice by reading it aloud to him at night. The second stanza is the first part of anything I ever memorized. Dad not only had us read from it, but would ask us what we thought it meant. It's got such a beautiful message of how to deal with life and those around you, how to temper yourself but not lose your joy. When I was a kid, my dad would change the last line for me and my sister to 'and what's more, you'll be a woman my daughter' and that just meant the world to me because yes, you can do all these things that a century ago made you a 'man' but you can own them as a woman."

Yooooo brother yu have talent this shit is different and I like it! I think you should really push it. This like the old ye when he was introducing the worldto Chicago! Don't ever give up give up! Nobody in the world wanna see you win more than you do! Respect

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That's what's up like the song it kinda needs work but it is a good song I just think the levels need to be work on that's all other than that the songvis a good song to listen to fasho good job indeed

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In my honest opinion, I think the song is bad. The beat isn't all that good and the pitch of the singing tones and rapping tones definitely don't help. There's no rhythm in the song at all so the vibe isn't created to set the tone of the song. There's no melody either. That's what you need to capture the listener's attention. I believe that music should be sonically inclined. Every sound should work in concert with each other to create that unified sound. It has to sound good to the ear first then the lyrics should speak to the mind and the way the lyrics are spoken should appeal to the soul. Don't be discouraged though just find your sound and build from there. One Love. Lo