Simple beat beginning with ego rap lyrics which sounds kind of cool. The soft lead vocalist voice offered another change. Unexpected, but nice. The song is good, seems a little robotic on the beat side. But still has enough difference to win. Thanks Magic

Me resulta una canción rara, en especial no me gusta mucho aunque se puede escuchar sin sufrir como con otras que hay por ahí. La melodía es más bien pobre aunque va mejorando con la canción, el sonido no es muy bueno, pero esto no es un impedimento si la grabación es casera (las mías son caseras), lo que más destaca es la voz, muy buena voz y bastante bien interpretada. El sonido que hay de fondo es muy molesto, no se que es exactamente y los efectos de voz mejor haberlos desechado.

This is a nice melody ..a good starter to make a song..but It need a lot of work..on Arrangement..Vocal and Quality recording..remember that Music Publishers and Radio Stations will listen only Excellent Production / Recording .They to not like long songs..when You send a song to Them ( if They gave You permission to send ) You have at most 10 sec to catch Theirs Ear and if They do NOT like ..They will not listen..I do think with a good Productions this will be a good song but again a lot of work has to be done..Good Luck..

Ok..I got a question for You.. do You really think this is a good recording and good song..see if You do that just for fun..yes I like It but as a Musical Pitch to Music Publisher or Radio Stations is not on that level..so re write .re record It as a Radio Ready Quality Recording and after all is done send out..as It is now I got a feeling THEY will agree with me..I wish You good luck with submissions and rememnber that THEY are Very Hard to Please.. good luck..

Like the retro C@@L Vibe... I always appreciate it when family is involved in any project. It adds a quality of honesty and intent that helps to deliver the final product as genuine and real. ( Honest positive critique/which always helps us all in the next project: The mix suffers a bit, the reverb wash is a bit heavy, and also, the heavy compression was taking a lot of the natural resonance of both Voice and instrumentation support tracks) All that said, I So appreciate you sharing your Music !!! Very best regards, TD :-) P.S. Keep up the good work Many blessings !

I'm not sure what are You trying to do..The Quality of Recording is not so good..arrangement need to be worked on..I do not think this recording was done in Recording Studio..any how,,This Song need a LOT of Work..Specially The Arrangement MUST be Better and make Intro shorter and remember that Radio Ready Recording mostly are between 3.5 - 4 min ling..so I wish You good luck with submissions but before that make sure that You have a better recording...