23 Hours On It
Song Reviews
General Salute!!
Nice! I like the blend of Hip hop and Dance hall. Well Cool!! Should be a bangarang slammer!!The producer in me says maybe tweak the mix a bit, but all in all tis a thing of quality and reflective of the time and effort put into it. Respect!!
United States, Kentucky, Lexington
Unconventional Electropop
This arrangement characterize unconventional sounds and effects. The unique vocals of the singer dominates this furious mixture of hip-hop and electro pop music. The keyboards puts one into a cosmos of different implemented sounds and creates immediately a varies space with easy mood melodies in the backround. This extra factor brings increasing mood into the song. The steady rhythm of the drum-machine forcing the music. The songtext comes from the heart and touches the soul. Overall an impressive song although of sparse instrumentation. I´m sure, you will likewise add it. Let others know your recommendation.
Germany, Hamburg
my oponion
your style have potential where as the way you flow on the riddim with that melody its good. the vision towards the lyrics is not defined however, when any clarity is not the best thereof, it confuse the audience and irritate their meditation of your focus but turn up the volume of the instrumental some more and relax on the riddim..personally i think you can get it the waw you are visioning the results, stay at your craft progress are deliver to those who approach their journey with the first step. FYAH Wail
United States, New York, Brooklyn
Nice style
Unique flavour. Just that i think you could settle a little mire on the beat. Lop the beat man...grove it..owned tgat beat beat brother! Need more clarity as well. Dint rush it... Need to be more calm. Stlye is great. You just need to master your sound. Your craft! Nice effort. ..keep pushing. Put in tgat work bro...im hearing great talent in you. Blessing my brother. One love.
Jamaica, Kingston
DaJamaican boy
Beautiful tune my brother, i love it slow jamming and rootical, beautiful message, keep up the good work, and good luck to all the works you doing and get all the support. All thr blessings
South Africa, Cape Town
Respect
Yes my brother this song is real vibes I can see this taking you places all you need to do it gets it into the right hands and you gotta market this hard don't just wait around push it to the limit bro
St. Vincent and the Grenadines, Kingstown
Top dance song
Thanks for posting of this wonderful piece of work by the General Da Jamaican Boy . The source of the reverb on the vocals gives the song it's dancesque style and dance that captures you. One of the nice things about this tune is the rhythm is so up front that it drives the vocal to become one of the instruments and. Is central to the consistency of the dance that never gives up the entire length of the song. Well done all round boys Jon M . at Downtown Detroit Dublin
Ireland, Dublin
Cool
Blessed! I I like your music style. Unique. I have a few constructive criticism, first, I thought you were off beat on some bars. Second , the hook should stand out. Keep up the good work! ! Blessed
United States, California, Anaheim
Up with good song
Good song love it you up.man keep doing it good music must be played up with good song gwaan do it mi gens u a d real genaral big up yourself blessed love best of the best righteousness lov
Jamaica, Kingston
23 hours onit
I don’t know if this is your first recording? But it definitely sounds like it ! The beat goes on and on and doesn’t change at all? This beat is off a phone or synthe ? This lets the track down and fails to deliver. Now the lyrics- one word incomprehensible Totally inaudible, terrible use of electro vocals and on all the time? If you’re gonna use it then only like on the chorus ? Speaking of which, where is the chorus? Seriously dude, go back to the drawing board, try again, get some style and rawness. Then try it over x
United Kingdom, Ryde
Nah
Song contains very overladen vocal reverb over average sampled beats. (straight out the box)Not cutting it for me. Wind back the effects in your vocals mate. Sounds like poor karaoke. Keep on though man, voice is good.
United Kingdom, Bradford
This make no sense
Yeah brother this track needs a lot of work I cannot understand what you are saying I want language you even Singing you need to bring this back to the drawing board and redo this song again and let the producer know that it needs a lot more work
Canada, Ontario, Toronto
DA JAMAICA BOY
TRACK IS COOL YOU JUST NEED TO HAVE AN ENGINEER MIX IT BETTER FOR YOU. THIS YOU BRAND,YOUR SOUND SO YOU WOULD WANT TO PUT OUT THE BEST SOUND YOU CAN...KEEP PUCHING BECAUSE WE ALL START FROM SOMEWHERE....
United States, Georgia, Atlanta
Good vybes
Yo le Général a encore frappé Avec ce beau mélange hip-hop sur une superbe production reggae. Mis à part la qualité d'enregistrement ce son reste une grosse tuerie. Et Franchement je le recommande à tous les mélomanes. Gros big up à l'homme qu'on appelle "General da jamaican boy"
France, Lille
23 Hours Review
The song writing is good in this song. I like the vibe of the vocals, and the beat is an upbeat hip hop for a clubby dance effect. The vocal does not sound recorded well. It is a very rough recording of the vocal, which is probably the most important part of the song. The vocal needs to cut through the mix and be clean. In this it sounds like a robotic tunnel or something like that. I have learned that even non musicians, music fans, can tell when music is clean or not. If this vocal were professionally recorded it would change the entire effect of the track. Again the song is not bad, but because this is vocal based music style, the vocal need be super clean, and maybe auto tuned, but clean. It ia worth investing in a better audio interface that will get a better sound quality out of a decent mic.
United States, California, San Francisco
My review
What Editng program is being used? Sounds unclear and over tuned. Cannot understand the content to the song the beat sounds luke it could be nice just too much auto tuned and amplified
United States, Colorado, Colorado springs