First let me start by saying i like the title of this song a lot. Song titles are important...Catchy song titles will at least get you a listen. I think this song has potential to be a really good song, but there are a few things I think has the potential to prevent that from happening: 1. The sound quality isn't radio ready. I would have the song remastered and then compare the current track with the new mastered track. You should hear a great difference once the track is mastered really good. 2. I also think the drums could be re-mixed for a better blend with the track (just my opinion). 3. I think you have a very powerful hook. Your lead vocal does a pretty good job, not a great job but a decent job. If you make the recommended suggestions I've given you your song will sound much better. 4. Your lyric is short and to the point...great job! 5. Your melody isn't a unique melody but it serves the song well.