Love the song. Take off the intro with the talking on it as it doesn't seem to fit with the song. Instrumentation is great.

Suave! and very sweet. No sharp edges. No sharp hook. Beautiful nonetheless. my 2 cents, Eric Blackmer

Your vocals are an A. The harmony is really nice. The words are inspiring. I just thing its a little boring after you play it for awhile. I love the piano in the instrumental. Don't take offense when I say it's a little boring. It just sounds like a song you would perform, like a ballad or something along that line. It wouldn't be a hit that would be requested over and over for airplay. Am not quite sure what kind of artist you are so am not sure what your aim with this song was. I do like it overall. Positive stuff that could be worked on if you wanna get some more life into it to keep your listeners awake. P.S for me it was a 7/10 and that's my highest rated review thus far and I've done many :)

Good love song, it's different from what I'm use to listening but great job. Go to www.reverbnation.com/kdsavannahke pls support and like my band page, thanks.

This is a classic love song for 14 years old school girls. Chorus is pretty good, but still needs some work. Verses are whispered, and man starts to be bored after few of them.

nice song for rainny days

This is a good song, but it could be a great song. It started with a nice piano intro that continued through the track, and a chorus line which was powerful, but the verses tended to be almost talked. You have a well capable voice David, so throw a little caution to the wind! This song is crying out for a fretless bass and some light brush work on the drums, a guitar lick added, would be the cherry on the cake.

I think its a good love song but it needs more work to get to a great love song! I think the chorus needs a bit something else maybe change it a little bit and add some more lyrcs to it so it can really hit people when the hear it, i think its to simple! But either way good work , you have it there just need to work a little bit more on it!

nice track sick ass vocals need a few more brakes but it still makes you want to roll a fat blunt and groove to the music

Wonderful. The piano is soft and have a great harmonic building. The vocal's work in the chorus is amazing. Vocal is very into the song. I felt this song so close to me. I think that it'll be with everyone who listen to this song. Great tune man. If you allow me say something i miss of some solo...maybe piano itself or another instrument like violin. Congratulations. Peace Aira Winterland Brazil

I think it's great! Just a few things to patch up. The piano is great, but it would give it more flair and more richness to it if you had strings and perhaps an acoustic guitar. I love the vocals great overall job! Just keep redoing it to perfection and You got yourself a winner n_n! Keep up the great work, never give up!

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Pretty piano. Great harmonies. Nice melody. Emotional performance. Song could benefit from some harmonic and dynamic variety. 2 chords back and forth, even with the wonderful variations, can be a tad repetitious. I like the stark boldness of the piano only accompaniment, but additional instruments would add to the emotion - guitar, drums, especially strings. Overall great job.

The first thing to praise about this song is the great sound quality. The piano sounds beautiful and once the Mumford and Son-ish harmonies come in, it just makes it all the more strong. Very nice attempt.

Very nice song.singing nice but pitchy in spots.Work on this song more,re do it ,and then redo it again,keep at till you clean up the edges.

I really like this song. The piano is great and the harmonies are too. It's mixed well. It's just a very relaxing and genuine song. I think you've done a great job and keep it up.

Very nice tune, the intro and first verse are a little drawn out but otherwise great. Good luck keep up the writing Hulk City Switzerland

vocals are nice but there many areas of stridency perhaps better use of compression song gets boring using just piano needs a little something to maintain interest maybe some hand percussion or acoustic guitar

very great i love it

Nice harmonies to start...there's a little background noise in the vocal track that distracts the piano part intro...probably a mouth noise you made before you sang... no big deal, but if you have that track recorded separate, you may want to remove it. Decent lyrics, they fit the softer piano vibe. The voice is close and intimate, but it feels a little too safe. There's not enough emotion for me here. I think a little Bono would go a long way. The first verse "to the..." parts seem to go on a bit long without building to the chorus quick enough. I would cut that in half. Overall this is a good start, but I feel the arrangement is a little too safe as well as the singing. I think a bridge, solo, or change up of some kind could help nail the point home....take us somewhere new and show us that there's nothing like THIS love song! Make us want to listen to this song again! Keep writing...you will get there!