Helo I think that you need to work on the strength that in your vocals to make it stronger. I like the topic and way of the song how you have it . I think its mixing something like a better mixed or vocal edit to be raised louder.

Nice 1 keep it up ,send me more of your songs direct follow me on twitter @katapilaa and add me on facebook: katapila streetleague

Good track with a nice feel to it.

The intro is very good and the music background is exciting. I love the song please listen I hear country ,feet slapping, hands clapping and altitude. This is your master piece so rock this song with down home country music. I feel a new birth coming out of you don't be afraid just let the music take you where you need to go. Thank you for the sound of music. St. Louis, Mo.

fx on vocals no good too thick what i like to do is clone the vocal track then put an fx like this on the clone and the other track clean bring up fx trk to suit like the drumming snappy geetar good vibe prob could use some backups some chickadee's

Thought this song was too long. Agree with the need for backup voices. Not the type of country music I like but I'm sure there is a large audience for this.

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David, always like your music, this one lacks something, maybe the soul that you always put into your songs. Comes across as very commercial. Very uptempo and country it is, and a good foot tapper, best in an open air show?

A great shuffle start, and then we are off! A Rock'n'Roll/Country Rockabilly mix, authentic sound, and yes, I like it. Criticism? Well, the track at this length (well over 3 mins) is great for live gigs, but as a radio track, get it down to that magic just over 2mins of old, and it will hit them between the eyes! Just an edit job! Otherwise, I love it, keep it coming boys!

Well mixed well sang, catchy melody. What I would do is hire some female backup singers to help. Best of luck, Guy

Bluesy hill/rockabilly tale of American motoring accomodation degradation and dead siblings. I did`nt know they still made music like this. -That`s not necessarily a bad thing - it could be Justin Beiber. Putting my (constructively) critical hat on I`d have to say it needs a more memorable hookline or lyric or chorus or whatever to grab yer attention. It takes a couple of listens to "get" the lyrics.

great rockin' bluesy guitars. vocals are reminiscent of a country version of Stan Ridgway. Well done song, very interesting music and lyrics. lyrics have a comedic feel that really works with the music. Overall a really good song worth checking out!!