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great music and song I felt that more energy should have had put forth into the song other than that great music and vocal arrangement

This song is very different as a singer /narrator being played here I like all of your songs David for real U have a gift

It's just a little too mellow for me. There isn't a lot going on. The song needs a hook somewhere. Nice harmonies. Keep at it.

I enjoyed the originality of this song. The musicianship of this tune made it enjoyable. I must say, I enjoyed this song more the second time than I did o my first initial listen. Some of the lyrics did not connect for me. But the song is fun really does make you smile. So it didn't matter to me in the long run of the song whether they connected or not. I like this song.

I enjoyed the song. The instrumental tracks are tasteful and lovely, and they suit the lyric content very well. Your vocals were pretty good, delivered in a relaxed and easy style that, again, fit the lyric content. If you decided to study with a good vocal coach, I think you'd be amazed at how much more that voice of yours is capable of. :-) Keep up the good work!

the song was too slow for me and couldn't keep me interested. the words didn't pull me in either. your voice in nice though. it just has that slow thing that makes me want to sleep

There is some really nice work on this track, needs some tweaking in places though. The neat bass line needs to be more prominent to give the track some more depth, as well as the drums to give the track a little more edge. There was some really good guitar work in the track, and the vocals were pretty good too, reminiscent of Paul Simon's solo material. There's plenty of opportunities to create a real ambience to this song, which I felt at times were missed. Still a good track though.

The production is soaked in reverb and needs some compression and a more interesting mix. The vocals lack conviction, strong control/sharp pitch. The lyrics and rhyme scheme are weak. That being said, the instrumentation had some tastey elements. Build on that and find the right chemistry.

you got a real cool vibe and sound your music not to much going on with the track makes it easy to enjoy makes you want to sit back smoke a blunt and groove to the vibe of the music keep up the hard/good work and i'll see you at the top... FOLLOW me on INSTAGRAM & TWITTER and like me on FACEBOOK http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005 http://instagram.com/pinhead_gotti https://twitter.com/pinhead_gotti OR on vine/iampinhead_gotti

Nice song. Very comforting. Nice backing, Okay vocals, but then, if the overall product is pleasant, not to be worried about. :) Pleasant listening. Nice guitar work. Good lyrics. I would prefer a better ending chord instead of an E major; chord at 01.12/01:32. Suggestion. Your choice, since did not notice a E throughout the song.

Good vocals I like the instrumentation on the track. The musicians are doing a great job. Keep moving man it great.

Good vocals I like the instrumentation on the track. The musicians are doing a great job. Keep moving man it great.

I like the intro, and the whole vibe of the song. You have an unique voice, and its nice, it has a bluesy feel but not the blues. Relaxing and Smooth. Overall I really like this song, I think you did a great job. Keep It Up, and Much Success to you. Note: Lets connect on social network. Facebook;https://www.facebook.com/luckee.luchiano?ref=tn_tnmn#!/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter;@760_Luch

Good instrumentation on the track. The vocals are good but not strong. I felt you could have gave more of yourself to the track. The lyrics are decent and the arrangement is nice. Keep plugging away till you land that hit!

Vocals very pitchy. Lyrics very corny. Some good musicians working with you, you're very lucky as the lead vocals need work. Take me away in the morning....