I have no criticism at all. great vocals and recording. I wish the song were arranged differently because it lack dynamics. I would have to listen many times to really get the lyrics. I start to wander off in mid song. it is the same from start to finish.very good but very boring

Very nice but repetitive in some areas re: "softly" I extremely like the music and song but the lyrics can improve. With the right lyricist this can be a hit with some minor changes musical arrangements and lyrics. In a scale from 1 to 10 I give it an 8. I hope you do the changes. keep up the good work.

Good song, but I would prefer someone else singing.

This is a good listen. Glad I had the opportunity to hear this! Keep up the solid work!

Nice ballad. Voice, recording and production sounds great. Yeah! keep up the good work

Like this.

Excellent song well arranged and played, song flows along nicely, great work.

The flow of the song is good, the relaxed tempo of the piano is good. I think I would like it better as a piano/vocal performance only. But some of the syth stuff adds some tension. Good songwriting, good luck to you!

This is awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross last year! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

niiiice!! :D very smooth sound! LOVELY :) good job

It is a weak song with weak vocals, it needs strong DYNAMIC voices and a production that builds up...vocals sound out of breath, try breathing deeper, background vocals rarely hurt either, with strong harmonies.

That synth is just TERRIBLE sounding. Everything else is sounding pretty good. Its so bad that it ruined the song for me. Otherwise its pretty and well written. The lyrics are decent, not in love with the vocal tone. Piano sound is the shinning part of the production. I wish there was a cheese pill you could take to take out the cheesiness and focus on the strengths. You have real talent, but man that synth made me cringe, and the mood is a little mellow-dramatic.

vocals need some upper mid eg or a roll off some lows also some verb would help too some type of percussion would benefit and another focal point instrument like a guitar solo would help this toon is just too bare and needs some arranging to succeed

Lovely song, great piano and vocals, very relaxing sound and feel well arranged and really enjoyed listening to your work.