Good words for a song it needs a good melody line and bridge to go with good luck with it .

great message different approach on how u kinda spoken worded it very unsusal but nice indie sound

it ok you can do better

real cool song love the track and the vibe really make you want to sit back smoke a fat Kush blunt and enjoy the sound so keep up the good work. follow me on TWITTER and INSTAGRAM and like me on FACEBOOK.... twitter.com/pinhead_gotti instagram.com/pingead_gotti http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005

I like the music , other than that it was only talking..couldn't get into it

It's ok

Good song. I liked the variety in the musical lines. Good creation. Maybe some kind a solo...any instrument.

Very good production. Needs a little more emotion. Georgia, United States 03.26.13

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Cool Talking Heads/New Wave kinda vibe. Nice. Trippy. Good arrangement and production values. Lead vocal could be softer - maybe some chorus? Overall very enjoyable.

Just listened to your song, I love the production. Its a nice laid back song with potential. The only thing I noticed is there in not too much emotion in the song to connect with the audience. Apart from that I was impressed with the whole song arrangement. Keep it up. Regards. Alcee