I listen to new music everyday and do a ton of reviews daily as well. This song does have some potential in the music industry. The over mix of this track needs to be re- tooled and re-mixed and mastered. Just smooth out some of the rough areas. I can tell what a few of your influences are and that is ok. Just focus on building your own sound from here. The story telling was good .. Great lyrics... We see a lot of potential here. We would love to work with you more... Visit us at www.theclinicrecords.com Remember what song reviews are for. Song reviews are build blocks that take an average song and make it great.. DEF CEO/Chairman The Clinic Records

I like it! Good idea with the music; nice bridge....nice ending. "Stevie" Williams

I like it! Good idea with the music; nice bridge....nice ending. "Stevie" Williams

Although I like the mellower feel to the track, I can't help but want to hear it go *BOOM* into a huge chorus with different melodic content to create a dynamic interest for the song. That never happened though, so it remained living in the same space throughout the tune which ultimately lost my interest. The overall balance of the recording was professional and good however.

I think you have a grasp on lyric writing. Better than most Ive heard today. I like your voice. It does sound very reminiscent of radiohead in the vocal melody. The melody however meanders quite a bit and doesnt really hook you in. I think the production is fair. I actually like the first 4 bars of the song the most. This song is missing a hook and a climax. Wheres the chorus? I cant grab on to anything as a listener. A bit forgetable.

Nice voice it's got a u2 meets Dave matthews and a few others! all in all Nice feel! Keep writing the music business is a tough oyster to crack it's usually the flavor of the day! But you may be the flavor there looking for on one particular day hang in there! Take care and God Bless.

Hi, I think you love RadioHead. Try to be more original. I want to ear YOU not Thom York, ok? Cheers

Over all this has a unique original sound vocals are understandable through out the whole song, and sound great nice high note near the end of the song good pitch. Dionisio, “I think yes you have found your voice” Lyrics are deep with great feeling. The production is good. Keep up the good work and good luck. ~Maria Donatelli~

Warm sound and deep lyrics. I like it! Greets

I like to hear good music and it what you have just done You have talent and you can make it big in music why not try a Record label