keep trying

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Song Reviews

Keep Trying

The beat, although simple, is easy to move to. I like the instrumentation, it's something that a lot of modern rap seems to neglect. Lyrically, it seems to have more thought than a lot of mainstream stuff, but that's not that hard to accomplish honestly. I do appreciate the effort. From a pretty hardcore rap hater, this song is pretty good. It definitely exceeded my expectations. I'll give it 4/5. Keep it up, this is the type of stuff rap should aim to be more modeled after.

keep trying

real hip hop my brothers.....love the truck...keep it real....

Greece, Thessaloniki-SKG

kavy

I like the lyrics it caught my attention.Keep up with the good music.Maybe we can make a track with each other one day hitt me up at key2dacity93@gmail.com

United States, Indiana, Indianapolis

Cool track

Dis has dat ol skool hip hop vibe 2 it which is ALWAYS a plus 2 me cuz u rarely hear hip hop in it's original form nowadays. Da verses are good...could've been delivered better 2 have more of an impact on da listener (which is jus as important if not more important than da actual lyrics themselves). Overall tho, U got a Really GOOD trak wit dis 1!!! Keep it up & keep improving!!! Oh yeah, da hook goes really well wit da music & da fact dat u're pushin originality is ALWAYS a plus as well!!!

United States, Georgia, Albany

sick beat, nice hook

The track comes on strong and draws you in. Really good beat. Great hook, love the positive message;people need to hear that. The verses are tight, nice flows. Very radio friendly, I like it. Get the right promotion and I will see you at the top.

United States, California, Los Angeles

Keep trying

I'm feeling this track, I actually had to play it a few times to get the vibe of the writer but I like it just wanted to hear more PERSONAL ventilation on the track in the barz

United States, New York, bronx

Review

Old School vibe> I think the lyrics need to be spit with more conviction & content and the mix needs to be brightened. It sounds a little gritty but that might have been what your going for. Overall a good feel

United States, Florida, Miami

review

Excelent, go on!!

Argentina, CABA

Distruck Yonkers, New York United States

The hook is hot. The verses could be a little hotter and you need more life in you when you spit. The track is pretty good as well

United States, New York, Pleasantville

keep trying

I'm not in to R&B and/or Rap at all, but the song sound OK, wouldn't turn it off in the car driving home. Nice tunes and sounds well done. Could be a hit I guess. The Rapper flows decently and is not anoying at all. Good song!

Review of "keep trying" by Franka

Good trip, production, voice ! Go on guys !

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This has a Coolio vibe to the vox, .. sort of. I really like it. I think it has both a groove germane to the genre and it is also very musical. Nice work. I like the chorus.

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