i like the mysterious intro, very original and with good sounds, like soundtrack; the sample is really great and mystich and the rapping makes the song very catchy;the most important thing to sell music; if the music and refrain doesn't keep the listener he doesn't say " i buy"; well produced and performed the song has an original oriental taste; being original is very difficoult nowadays; keep it up and good work

Well produced and written with the right ambiance. I can see the scenes playing out in my mind's eye as I travel through the verse however the story is too short.

The song is okay. You kept the attention and that's good. Can't understand most of your words, but it wasn't wrong. It sounded like something lots of hip hop listeners would play.

The melody and harmonies of the song express its program and atmosphere very suitable. Notable, good combination of a very clear sentimental melody and soft rap voice. Good supporting sound of light drums appearing in patches. A quiet female rap voice in the beginning could also follow the light drums being developed, e.g. contrarily, also the guitar timbre. Starting itself could be more obvious and less noisy. Carry on!

I thoroughly enjoyed listening to this song. I related to the music and words being spoken/sung. The arrangement of the song is good, a atmospheric beginning opening into a vocal/drum driven section with strings adding colour. I like the female backing vocal and the way it pops in and out of the track. The production is good, with each instrument having its place. my only complaint is it's too short, short and sweet I suppose. Good Job!!

Very nice song yeah! Very nice background sounds, great vocals, this is a song to to be listen at night, sitting in the garden, looking at the stars... heheh Great tune dude! A shame that it is so short! Maybe a chorus part will be make this song much greater.

Do what you can to get your craft out there, Peace. http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/justinnathanielson