Hello we've just heard your track and here are some of our thoughts. We like the general beat and rhythm although we think the vocals are somewhat crowded and think some refraining would help and maybe turn this into two tunes that sequel each other part one and part two maybe.. we think that the music should be given more of an airing to convey the feel and content of this song.

Make sure Everytime your satisfied with a recording do, it sounds like magic to you. If it doesn't sound like magic to you then it won't be even the slightest bit successful!!! You have an original sound. You come off like reggae BT have electronic mixed in and just sound like your into your creations more.

I listened and tried to follow the flow but it's sounds scattered at times also I think the language sounds mixed with English which makes it appears undistinguished at times. The message gets lost in the delivery Your music sounds good but because of how you ride the track it doesn't do you justice

Hello, Just listened to your track. I liked the spirit behind it, but I wanted to hear more of your voice unmodified. Also, try not to use well known phrases such as "looking for love in all the wrong places," at least not without modifying it a bit, such as "looking for love, and I've only found traces". Poor example, but you know what I mean. I liked the lyrics and the music overall though. Keep up the work!

This is a very heartfelt emotional song.I like the music sounds good.I think maybe the vocals might be just a tad bit loud over the music. Just a little bit. But your vocals are awesome. you song is beautiful. And your instrumental is outstanding. Very nice concept and this is a very nice composition as well. i would definitely listen to this while in my car or even at home just chilling. I think you did an awesome job with this one. I love your accent as well. Very nice romantic clean song. I'm giving you five stars because i think you deserve it. You are talented and soulful and i think you'll go far. Keep up the good work.

hey awesome song keep pushing keep pressing bro keep being inspired by things u see God going to bless u with many blessing dont allow anything to distract u keep pushing u will grow.i

I'm feeling this track! This is a great inspirational track. I am usually and introduction person. The intro grabbed my attention. The title is great. Pen and Paper..oh how effective we can be with that. Good luck DOAP! Keep writing and producing tracks. Navigator

I enjoyed the rythem of your Spoken Word " Pen and Paper " . It was very nice to listen to Clean Lyrical Spoken Poetry I really love the way your track was keep light and airy and not overpowering your voice !! Well done my Friend !! Peace , Love and May God continue to BLESS You !

First things first, props for doing you and as long as you like it. IT SHOULDNT MATTER WHAT OTHER PEOPLE THINK.! Buuut if you wnat others opinions Feedback is always GREAT.!! soo hers mine thee good and bad... As an artist my self i respect every artist, buut theres jus some of them that juss shouldnt be behind a mic, and its hard to base an artist off of one song. form what i here on this song, you need alot of work. on juss about everything... you do sound like your juss started out. thee quality of this wasnt very good at all.... your lyrics were decent , sounded like personly shit. which i always like. you need to work on your voice, and flow. and if its an internet beat, that you havnt bought personly and even if it is free. Its much better to try and make your own, or even get in touch with some one to produce one for you, itl look alot better. being said, if you ever need beats, hit a kracka up. Still a decent song, iv heard worse buuut have heard alot better. Keep on keeping on bro.! much love.

Killa Beat dope rhymes you bring flavor and heat to life keep this ish active and alive too many indies out to listen to the radio thats the best thing about outlet like this for a label standpoint a good overall sonic collection here #respect

Not really my kind of music but I'll try none the less. If we exclude the vocal tracks, musically it's not too bad, it does sound like a copy of something, it's is repetitive, dull and also too low in the mix. The vocals are....let's be kind and say, bad. There is a lot of background white noise on the track, don't know what that is. I would try a different vocalist or a different style of music.

Delivery delivery delivery needs help but i thought the hook was going thru the whole song but I guess you trying bruh I'm not trying to be hard on ya but at least ya not on here sounding like yung thug!!!!!!!!!!