I don't know, if i should like it or not. It's really a weird song/rap, the spoken lyric. To me, it looks like that it doesn't fit. But i guess this is done on purpose. Not on the beat and the spoken lyric is not in tune. I did listen to other tracks, but these we're and sounds good. It' sounds really cool to me. Like i said i really don't know what to think of this song.

Spittin that real shit my G. Dudes walkin blind to what's poppin on these streets. DOAP that was dope for sho!!!!!So if whoever don't understand the words that come outta of this poets mouth need stop, rewind and play this shit back. On the Strength!!!

Very deep, prolific track that truly touches the raw nerve of current society dilemmas. Almost comes across as a spoken word piece. I can appreciate the candid & unabashed message. Nice work.

Outstanding Beginning and end i enjoy the concept of the whole thing it was Good Bro thank you I really enjoy it never give up keep it up Excellent Job P.S. Stay humble Stay Blessed Because You Are Blessed And Don't You Forget That In Jesus Name Amen

This song reminds me of Spoken Word. A poem that has a beat. It seems that the violence has not let up yet so the message in the song is still relevant. I think the song may even have more influence on the ears if the verses were done over a more cinematic type production with maybe a violin and a choir somewhere to bring more emotion out. Along with that possibly some reverb on the vocals to make it sound bigger. The song is not bad but I think better production will bring out the words more.

powerful words empress word sound power these are really what the world needs to hear and try to live from freedom for all not just one set of individuals and if we so desperately need that change we need to educate ourselves and then state ourselves just as you are doing now i salute you my black Queen stay blessed and on top of your game looking forward to hearing more from you as it seems wisdom is a rare commodity in this day and age #ThisIsWhatWeDo

I really love this. Very poignant. This message is so powerful. Your voice is powerful. I love how you just kept it so conversational. I love this so so much!!!!!!!! "When I say Nigga it's not a race...Every race has them Black ppl just occupy more Nigga space." Brilliant. Beautifully done. The only thing critical anyone could say about this is the tag on the music track is slightly distracting. But that is irrelevant. Please keep doing your thing. I'm a fan!

This is very different and nothing what I was expecting. The tone, the disscussion on real world word problems but all in brought up in a different way. It's very inspirational but also serves as a wake-up call to society. It brings out most of the problems American culture faces in 2016. This is brilliant, good job

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I don't want to be cruel about this track, it's not my usual kind of music and the music is pretty good...but I don't think this voice is right for this kind of music. I don't find it convincing, it sounds like a middle class white kid in his bedroom trying to be hip and hood. If I talk about the content of the lyrics, 'paranoid' springs to mind...it's a song of rebellion against police and society, it just makes me cringe...sorry, not for me!

May Day! May Day! is so true! I'm so glad someone has the courage and respect to create these lyrics for this song! People need to listen to this song and learn from it, because it's all so true! Great lyrics with a great vocal, over a sweet, mellow beat. Diary of a Poet -or- DOAP is dope! And May Day! May Day! is the song that spells out the future, unless as Ms.DOAP suggests, we get together, rise up and stand against the people trying to take us down.

Dead on! excellent explanation. Its pretty amazing that you mentioned Martial Law, "Theres a deeper sinister fact" behind it. Look up on youtube. But again, Dead on! Congrats. I would've liked to of heard a little more political information within but overall it was well put together.