Interesting song, with quite the build, starts out angelic, then really kicks in with some great guitar work in addition to the keys, drums and bass! It reminds me of Emerson Lake and Palmer's song Pirates in the sound, yet it's clearly your own. Beautifully arranged and dramatic. Orchestral Rock!!

Melody makes it for me. Lyrics encouraging. That said, I wouldn't mind hearing a more basic version of this song, melody and vocals only. Sorry, I highly recommend you invest in a new vocalist. Give "Together" its best showcase. It is deserving. Overall mix, dynamic with the exception of a few drum overlays that seem distracting. Thanks for sharing DSREAL. Peace

This is a very progressive production that definitely sounds very european. I hear flavors of Bowie, Camel, early Genesis and a dozen other influences. I really like what you are doing here. As far as any recommendations, I would suggest getting a better mix of your vocals. I like them, I just feel they should be clearer and a little more out front for the listener. Not knowing how or where you recorded this but I would suggest taking it in for a remix to bring it all out in its fullest it can be. It's a good song... it simply needs to get that perfect mix! Keep writing in this style. It's a long lost art that needs to come back to life for those of us that are tired of what is on the airwaves today! Good luck in the future.

Kind of a long intro but interesting. Guitar sound is excellent! Everything falls apart with the lead vocal. The melody could work with the song but another vocalist is needed to bring beauty to the track. If it were me, I would step back from singing, get another vocalist, keep your instrumental tracks and do the mix again with the new vocalist. Once again, LOVE the guitar work!

I'm going to be very real with this review. to begin i like this song , a lot . The cool thing is it reminds me of several different artists from a couple different eras. that by the way that is a very good thing . You don't copy anything , it just give the listener a feeling of familiarity. Which when it comes to having commercial sucess with a pop type tune is critical. The chorus is strong and very hummable , another good point. The vocal melody is also good , and pretty accessable for the average ear. Now what find interesting is the vocalist himself , i'm an American ,and can tell he is not . which is cool because the song has a very euro synth feel. I see he's swedish , nice accent , comes off well to an English speaker . Now the production stuff... The main thing to make this a radio friendly hit record is tighten up the arrangement first . At presnt it's a really good mix for the clubs . So here's how to get it on the radio . The intro is too long, skip the first chord thing , and go right into that cool chord progression , that's your hook ( it sets up a tight groove immediately people gonna get up and dance ) then hit the chorus , bang , now go to the verse and follow the rest of your verse chorus pattern any way you want . For an outro , go back and forth between that instrumental hook (from the intro ) and the chorus to fade out..... also I'd use a fuller band to beef it up , and add dynamics. excellent possibilities with this one.

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Is not important if I like or not..the intro is way to long and To Much Computer work in arrangement and Vocal need to be much better in order to catch Music Insiders Ears..this is at best an average song and again They are Looking for Something on Out of this world level and Your song has a long way to go to be there..also make sure it is around 3 min long .remember that Radio Stations Very Rear play longer songs.... go for and send It out but do not be surpriseif They will agree with me...

Fresh sounding music in the pop world of just digital sound to hear great bass, drums and guitar. Nice vocals and words with a really nice production. I will add this to my play list with all the other great people I found here.

A SLOW STEADY BUILD FOR THIS TRACK HAS YOU IMMERSED FROM THE OUTSET USE OF SYNTH IS A NICE TOUCH HERE I WASNT EXPECTING VOCALS ON THIS TRACK AS THEY DO COME INTO THE SONG UNEXPECTEDLY WORTH A FEW LISTENS

I will go like that.. in today music World to many people are using computer generated music.. not real instruments..Do You know that Most Music Publishers do NOT take to to listen It..on top of that This is not the best song I ever hear..and is Way to long for a Radio to play..so.. is not important if I like It or not..THEY music Love It.. and I got a feeling that THEY will agree with me.. so go for send It out.. but do Not expect much..Good Luck..