This is a great written song. I like the chorus melody. If you wrote this song, you should consider trying to shop this song to an established group or artist. Your singing is okay but I still think you tend to jump right out the gate with doing too much. You don't give the song that build up moment because as soon as you start, you're already doing "vocal runs" and showing off power and things like that. Let the song build up. I think the beginning (music intro) is too long. I think if you did a four line intro of music, and then jumped into the chorus with minimal ad libs before the first verse you'll set up a better arrangement for the song. The way it is now, you are giving a listener that hasn't heard the song before time to fast forward or skip the song before it begins. I almost did it myself. New listeners don't want to wait to see if they will like the song or not when streaming. You want to catch their attention quickly, and keep it. I would say you still need some vocal training also. You're not a bad singer. But you have room for improvement. You did the harmony well and like I mentioned early on in this review, the chorus was pretty good. Everything still needs some tweaking. I'm hearing different things as well during your verses. For example, I'm hearing a singing note/ad lib go down verses going up kind of tweaks. The way it is now, I would presume it's in demo phase for another singer to learn the song before recording. Bottom line... It's a good song that I would put more time in. And then ask for a new review. 'Keep pushin'.

well to begin with this. i was totally not expecting what i heard. The song starts with a piano chord progression that is very beatlesque , and then the vocal reminds me of that groups singer...well know who. And it all flowed together so well. i had listened to a few other songs before deciding to review this one, This one stood out for its uniqueness. And very well performed i may add... good luck with this one bro

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i really enjoy your music, i think your awesome. it very touching to hear your songs. i like your style and nice vocals. keep progressing about love, and be that artist that we really need. thanks for being an artist, some i can listen to. great work bro, musch love

This is a very beautiful song! I can really see this being played at a wedding reception or as a first dance song. The beat is very soothing and takes you away in a good way! This track is crisp like a breathe of fresh air. The lyrics are quite beautiful and speak from a loving place. Keep up the good work and don’t stop! There are not too many true love songs where a Man expresses himself so deeply to a Woman. I appreciate good music and this falls under that category! Much Love Ahsha Fiyah

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This is a great song. The vocal mix is lacking though. I expected to hear those reverbs and delays pop to add to the epic vibe I get from the record. This could be in a movie no doubt but the mix is separating this record from good to great. Also some of your notes are off which again could be used with a little pitch correction. Melodyne or light autotune could have fixed the issue to help you hit the notes you need. Maybe a couple more Adlibs here and there might have gave the record more filling ...if you had someone hit high notes and put that in the background on some of your turning point bars and blend it in with your vocals ....these are all ideas that could help that record turn from good to great. Your a talented guy keep working....in fact ....email me the session send me your email through messages and let me give a crack at mixing those vocals ...I've engineered for almost a decade so I'm sure we can both help each other win.

I want to start out by saying that I'm a huge fan of creativity as well as originality and you definitely displayed both on here. Excellent production. Dont let nobody tell you that you should change anything! Good work3

Great music & creativity, keep up the good work, I wish you, your family, friends, and fans health & safety during these unusual times, follow me on IG & Snapchat @ sweetdaddy_melo ..I’ll followback when I see you drop in

I must say that I really enjoyed listening to this track. Nice and smooth flow. Good storyline with a nice lead vocals and the background vocals were nicely done as well. I love the piano throughout the track. I would have also enjoyed a nice saxophone track mixed in. But all and all I must say this was a nice track/ good love song! Hopefully someone will hear it along with the rest of you music and give you a shot! Best of luck too you! -Chandler-

This actually is not a bad song. Definitely has potential but can be a lot better. Has potential to be a really good song, just needs the right producer/engineer. Would love to hear other songs.

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Good morning, how are you? I just stumbled across your page. Your song fly with you love is so so Beautiful! I love the feeling that this song gives. Powerful, and the lyrics touched my heart.

Nice idea for this songs. Very positive song. I can dig it. It reminds of the old school 90’s r and b. Seems like you are enjoying what you are doing. Keep it up. Keep singing and showing the world your talents.

Fly,................. It spurs me, your singing Makes me feel light And cheerful Because I love you And your voice is your part In the joy that Is my heart And the radiance Of that smile of yours That imbues in me A wealth of feeling; Do keep singing then, I pray you make the whole world love your music as much as i do when i listen to it. This is what the whole world needed you have the ability to go to the top. Never give up.................................Duce

I like this track. Its smooth and the vocals are good. I really like the hook of the song. This song is a good representative of someone in love. I think people would use this song in their weddings or for Valentine's day. Overall a good song. Blessings to you and yours.

I like your song very much, it starts with a very soft piano pattern and augment to a higher level. Your voice is really emotional and deep of feelings. You can hear the feeling of flying, width and freedom. Even the vibration in your voice is making girls happy hearing your music. I see your effort in it. The general beat is slow, so very relaxed. Also the sodding I like a lot. Just one point: Your cover. You should show yourself - yes, but not that close, try to show more width in the background and more expresses in your face, maybe not black and white. Go on with your work.

i think your music is very good dont give up on it no matter what . life will throw stones but keep going you are ver talented at what yo do. great work an great music, i hope you make it to the big league. also i hope i see you there maybe one day we can collaborate on some good music allin all your a good person i can tell

 This makes me feel good riding in my car on a hot summer day while the top dropped playing it real loud nice flow to it nice beat lyrics sound fire on this track i will be playing this one for real

It spurs me, your singing Makes me feel light And cheerful Because I love you And your voice is your part In the joy that Is my heart And the radiance Of that smile of yours That imbues in me A wealth of feeling; Do keep singing then, I pray you make the whole world love your music as much as i do when i listen to it. This is what the whole world needed you have the ability to go to the top. Never give up.................................DAWAN