I find your music rather interesting. It is very soothing and i feel you may be able to make money by selling it as may be a musical score in a TV or Film scene. Keep up the good work as i really enjoyed listen to this wonderful piece.

I THINK IT IS A GOOD JOB Be wanting some things like, I think they are very separate instruments, better distributing each and giving its location on the spectrum more compact sound I think. Add more effects. The effects used to give the feeling of being near or far, you could work a little more dynamic to give your song. Add a little more percussive elements. Some items such as tambourines, bells, simple things to give ambiance to your song There is much stereo separation, ie, widely separated left and right, that is very little in the middle, giving it less dynamic Add a little more sense of depth. Finally you can achieve more sense of dynamics to properly adding a bit of delay and reberv. The camposicion will have a better sense if located everything in place, highlighting various elements to give better flow to your song.

The composer move her taste through romantic way mixed with hard modulations but the result it is something that sound hurting and boring. You should concentrate on a more fluid language.

I love the strings and cords I was waitng on the so morengs to be just a lil more like maybe increasing the volume of the music a bit louder still great job keep up the good work maybe you could add more instrument to the arrangement to increase the level of excitement and keep the audience waiting to see what happens next the sound is very classicl though I could see this being very great with just a li