I really like and enjoy your music keep on making great music and never stop creating Growing up as a little kid I use to listen to all types of music keep on going God bless you in all your endeavors.

Intro is very interesant und die voices sind sehr schön stimmig Der Track geht sofort ins Gehör und bleibt hängen. Für mich ein track der bestimmt ein Hit werden kann Schön das ich diese Nummer hören durfte Greats from Germany G.W.Scott

And very nice lyrics .... very beautiful and the orchestration as well as the variations in the music of the song .... a very careful musical work with good production ... nice sounds in the guitar the bass the music keys ... Very good and right tempo to the drums and very good harmony too .. the vocals and the interpretation may perhaps be placed a little better on the musical measures but this is purely subjective view because they are objective and they are just fine ... the fade out in the end Completes it, flawless and stylish music Show this very beautiful song !!!!!

Hi Eric. nice song. Musically well done. Good harmony of voices. It's good rocknroll actually. Nice sounding guitars. drums could have been a bit stronger to my opinion. But it's a great composition. There are not many people nowadays that can write such an elaborated composition. The fade out is superb. You sing well, but the lyrics are just a tiny bit too light if I may be frank. But. Hey. You know that a good tune really sticks in your head, man, you can even dream it. This is worthy of being played on the radio. Curious for more of your music. Check: N1M search: spiceypete Pieter B. from Ghent, Belgium

Hello Erik at first listening I seemed to be back in the 80's. Your really beautiful song I really like so much though there is to be improved at some points I ask you what follows. Then your song is singing and you can easily remember a beautiful harmony and melody. We have to correct some things about the tools. You have to change the Drums to make it back to top and also the Bass, the Guitar and the synth under but the song is good. You can adjust it can get to a much higher version listening. Good Luck.

Tout d'abord félicitations pour la construction de la chanson qui est très agréable à écouter. La mélodie et en particulier celle du refrain est très bien trouvée. Les arrangements style rock vont très bien avec cette mélodie . Je suis que gère de pratiquer un mixage qui métrer un peu plus en avant la basse et la batterie . Je propose d'ajouter des effets à la voix et quelques chœurs pendant le refrain. Je suggère de compléter la mélodie avec des réponses jouer avec un ensemble de violon pour le refrain . En tout cas félicitations et bonne continuation dans la création musicale

I have a feeling for good music. Best conditions to write something about it. This song goes to the heart and touches the soul. I was surprised when I realized that it was not impossible to dance to this music. Okay - I do not dance. I somehow move to the beat. And this probably looks rather droll. But in the clubs where this music is played, nobody should disturb it. But why do I tell this? Well, you might be a pop music fan, looking for the light at the end of the tunnel for good music. This music is not far away from normal radio hits and this one is an original. Listen to the song and if you like add him. Let others know your recommendation.

A nice song with a great feel good catchy vibe to it. It also brought back memories of a song from yesteryear called ''Major Tom'', very similar. I liked the up beat tempo of the chorus, as well as the very good harmonies when they kicked in. It is very much of a minimalist song as far as solo's are concerned, but that does not detract from the overall good quality of the song. Good effort Erik, very well done.

Me ha parecido una muy buena canción. El tema tiene ritmo, fuerza y energía. Los instrumentos están en su sitio. La producción y el sonido es bueno. Está también muy bien la voz del vocalista, bien acompañada por los coros. Me ha gustado el cambio de intensidad que se produce en la canción, aunque posiblemente me hubiera gustado un final más concreto. Mucha suerte y saludos desde España!

hello , there is good things in this song . The voices are catchy but , ( its just a point a view among others ) there is some weekness in the chorus , not the melody , the melody is good but just some imperfection in the singing that put out some some strengh to a song a song wich is otherwise very pleasant to listen to .anyway i wish you the best for your music and all the rest .Jerome

Right out the gate the guitar riff generates a sense of possibilities. Building in controlled anticipation the verse layers up to the chorus releasing the amounting tension into a great musical refrain. Second verse and chorus sustain the energetic momentum cascading and merging with the bridge sounding like a peaceful paradise skillfully arranged so as to allow the chorus to jump back in without skipping a beat. Great lyrics and songwriting.

The intro is kind of boring. It doesn't get me ramped up. I think you could add something more creative there. The song is much better once everything kicks in. Good production. Has an 80's pop rock vibe to it. An interesting message. Not your typical lyrics. The instruments seemed well played. Nice energy to the song. I like the breakdown. I could see this song being used in a throwback movie. Not the best vocal performance I've ever heard technique wise, but it's unique and interesting to listen to.

INTERESTING THEME LYRICALLY I WOULD LIKE TO HEAR MORE DIVERSITY FROM VERSE TO CHORUS IN WHAT APPEARS TO BE A CONSTANT DRUM MACHINE PROVIDING THE RYTHM TO THE SONG A SUGGESTION WOULD BE TO JUST HAVE PIANO IN VERSES AND BRING FULL PRODUCTION INTO THE CHORUS TO HELP LIFT THE CHORUS OTHERWISE A GOOD EFFORT HERE AND WORTH LISTENING

I will start off with what I really liked about this song. I'm an older man and the lyrics are what I ask myself on a daily basis now. The concept of this song for me is perfect for someone whose lived most of their life. The bridge approx 2 mins and 20 seconds into the song was very good. The vocals and music were good. However I believe that younger people wouldn't feel this song only because they haven't yet lived their lives in full. The song awkwardly ends with approx 25 seconds of dead time. Not sure what happened there. With all that said, I dug this song~

Sounds like an 80s rock/pop song which is not bad on these days where everything is some dubstepped hip-hop songs, I enjoyed listening to this song, I loved the interlude at the final part of the song, it's catchy! Cheers

Great rich vocal tones that help create the ambience that is a song which shares a tale of being sucked into the world of Las Vagus. I enjoyed the arrangement with the electric and piano.