Wow this is dope ass sample super amazing beginning, wow i love the lyrics the beat is super cold. You have a cool chill vibe about ur delivery. New york but midwest in the swag.. so positive message giving hope to those who dont have goals or think they cant make it. Super nice i listened to the whole track.. thanks for this song really thats.. keep pushing keep making music

Thanks for the positive vibes and giving people such as hope what it feels like to believe in your dreams again to push yourself into the way you want to be excited about your future and your dreams coming true and bringing your own happiness into your life I appreciate you having your way to work just as well as your own life thanks for continuing to try and make a change

This is a great result of great production partnered with some lyrics. The engineering on here was well executed as well. Sound like whoever recorded this did a great job as well. I was listening to this at a family get together and everyone agreed this is some good feeling music. You should really consider getting a website and getting music on some major platforms like Spotify, iTunes, Tidal, etc. I can help cause I am a graphic designer and can help market your music to a wide audience.    

I like this track! very clear and god production. good story you told and I like that you kept it real! Good song. The beat is fire I love the sample in it .. This sends out a clear message and this is something I will play in my car. Mellow tone and something you light a L to.

I enjoyed listening to this music right from the very beginning. Lyrically, this song is very well written and preformed. The best is smooth all throughout the song, it's a perfect balance, easy listening and kept me interested all the way through. Great job and song.

Keep going hard family need more artists out there like you that's talking about something I rock with you maybe one day we'll collaborate or something but I like the song though. Stay in touch make sure you follow me back man

FIRST BIG UP AMITYVILLE YES DOPE TRACK USING THE JANETJACKSON CLASSIC DEEP IN WHAT YOUR SAYING IS SO TRUE(AS IT SAYS GOD WOULD'NT HAVE PUT THAT DREAM IN YOUR HEART IF HE DIDN'T WANT YOU TO LIVE IT)DOPE FLOW GOOD ENERGY HIGHLY RECOMMENDED RADIO/CAR/PARTY VIBES CAN GO COMMERCIAL YOU CAN REACH A WIDER AUDIENCE IF YOU WANT TO SAME THING WU TANG SAID AS WELL ABOUT DREAMS

wow nice some rap AWESOME what a beautiful ..........VOICE and iove the way it was sung ......................love the way the vocals are done.................this song has a really good melody lines.......................the backing vocals are amazing the way they were collaborated.................... ...simply were amazing cant say enough the way they were sung.................the song was put together is very unique..........just love the way its sung the vocals are spot on........................ the vocals had a perfect pitch..................I want to thank you for letting me review your amazing song thsnk you....................... This is steve from voodoo dancer and thank you again...........................

HipHop needs a new direction and this song proves that. Clear and decisive vocals, smooth cadence and delivery. Not the run of the mill lyrical content. Original style seems to come from poetic thoughts put to music. "Dreams" is good music!

I like the vibe and the lyrics in this song. Your flow is smooth and I appreciate that you talk about something that makes you look like you have character as a person. Love the line-"Never feel embarrassed the master says I'm only here because of practice!"

Hot shit ! Flow on point, beat on point ! Keep up the good work. Would reccomend to any listener. Check out my material here on n1m but youtube and soundcloud is where im at ! Look forward to hearing more of your music !

This is what the industry needs. Hearing these lyrics provide strength . Shineboy16 story is real as well as the message. The beat was easy on the mind, not to get carried away with but to catch you from the start and lead you to his verses. Some of your lyrics can be used in commercials for many topics. Soundtradr! Great song overall.

Good conceptual song put together very well with some wise speech. Some real hip-hop shit and an artist with some real talent and originality. I’ve listened to a lot of music on this site and this is one of the better songs that I have heard and can truly appreciate. This isn’t just a hip-hop or rap song, this is hip-hop music and that’s what I’m all about. I can tell the work that was put into this track!

Yo. This is very clean. Nice sound. Mix is nice too. Transitions throughout your rhyme scheme is tight and efficient. Deep lyrical substance and content. Compositional choice is dope. I can appreciate this. #DopE #HipHop

The only thing that I can say is I dig a message of positivity and inspiration . You definitely hit it out tha box with this track. And its hard to not get your point across over a fire Jam and Lewis track. Your vocal flow definitely complement the track and leaves me with a positive vibe.. I like laid back rap tracks where the artist is painting an inspiring Vision. Fire for sure. Keep tha heat up, Shineboy16 Peace RandyMAN!