Lots of potential here. Hot bass line. Could use background vocals and harmonies - especially on the chorus. Another instrument would help fill it out. Still needs refinement.But as I said, lots of potential. Good song length. I like it and with some clean up I could love it!

The vocals sound good. It sounds like you have the lows a little too high on the guitar, that or your guitar amp is running through a bass amp. I would definitely find a bassist and a drummer and this could be a great song.

This is a good start. Would develop it a bit more and maybe add more instrumentation.

I think you should and will record this professionally!!

It is a nice song. Voice is good as is guitar. I am curious what this song would sound like with a bull band. Keep up the good work..

Good song. Record it.

A fun and honest song enjoyed it.

This is awesome! Keep it up! Check my music out at www.Facebook.com/NileRossMusic I opened up for Rick Ross last year! Follow me on twitter too @NileRoss

Chill song. Mellow. Lyrics are cool. Seem like this is 1 take. Good Job. P.S. Lets connect on social media... Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Luckee-Luchi/183962798334537 Twitter: @760_Luch

A stupid song poorly played, poorly recorded. you are trying to be funny, i think. this song is somewhat racist and xenophobic. You just need to start over and consider what you are singing and how well you can sing it. some people might like it, not me..

guitar sounds like shit to be honest perhaps you have a message to share but the music sucks