The flow seems forced on some parts but over all you did your thang. Buy this beat and record this and release it. I would love a feature on this one. The topic is right, the hook is trill. Do it! Rating would be up if the recording was better.

BOOKSCORRESPONDENCECREATIVE WRITINGNEWSPAPERS & MAGAZINESPOETRYQUOTATIONSWRITING LetterPile»Writing»Commercial Writing How to Write Meaningful Paid Song Reviews on Slicethepie Updated on April 15, 2017 chasmac profile imagechasmac moreContact Author Source What Is Slicethepie? For anyone who doesn't know, Slicethepie is a music review site where ordinary members of the public can join up free as a scout (also called reviewer), listen to new songs, and write a short review about the song for a small payment. Each review is just the member's opinion of the song and/or artist. No special musical skill or knowledge is required as the site wants the opinion of the wide general public. In recent years, it has also enabled members to give reviews on fashionable clothes and phone cases, but those are more of a sideline, so this article is only concerned with the music side of Slicethepie and how to write song reviews. As an experienced reviewer on Slicethepie and musician, I wrote this article to advise new scouts on how to write reviews that can be more helpful to the artist, even if they (the reviewers, not the artists) don't have any formal background in music.

First of all the beat is hot and the intro is very invitational. The hook is catchy and nice, and the lyrics are pretty good. Overall I see greatness in this song. It has potential to top the charts. Keep it up!

Nice Positive energy love it. Orchard Sony sponsors a tour called Iconz Street Legends. You may audition for this tour during our competition phase Best Of The Best Survivor Series. For more information please like us on Facebook RAYN Entertainment

! I like it. Dope lyrics. The is definitely hot. The verszes are dope. Let's put something to gether. I think we can make some hits. Call me when you get some free time. 2162103610 or text me at 2163567525 anytime

It comes a time in every man's life where he's gotta put it down. You put it down on this track dog. You sound demanding on the mic bro. Do you travel to the West Coast? If I send you some Westside shit, can you demolished the track? What's your email address family?

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

what it do tho!!! your track is fire tho!!! keep yo head headed toward million dollar dream because hataz gonna hate but true skill is in your art your musicc!!! god bless & keep bringing that fire!!!

Good song keep goin at it. Hopefully 1 day we a do something. Make sure u check my page out im just startin mixtape on da way soon wit videos. If u like da music hmu so we can try nd do something.

The production is dope, brotha. The content is relevant...until it's not...which has always been relevant. Knowledge is power...so the people controlling the knowledge control the power. It is in there best interest to do so...why would they not? Let's get off that shit and on to something better. Your voice is distinct and unique. Your flow is snappin' and vocal register is high so, it penetrates lows and mids well. Your lyrics make me want to listen. I haven't heard the rest of your music and if it's anything like this...you have my ear, sir. Big up's, bruv! Mike White

hip hop is not my music genre of choice, but i am always fascinated by how inventive some of these rappers can be. hemi g falls into that category in this song. i found the flow quirky and interesting, albeit a little monotonous after a while. it reminds me a little of kanye west, but then again one may ask "what do you know about hip hot?". zilch, if the truth be told but i enjoyed it and listened it twice.

This is a dope track right here fam nice beat and a nice flow to bring it out I always support indie artist they're the ones who always come up with the best material and sound hungrier then the signed artist keep up the good work fam

I like it. I support the awakening of our people. Conscious music for the consciou community. So many are still asleep. Great work. Checkout my video He Won't Leave his Wife by Adrena on YouTube

the lyrics are tight but i dont like the Lil wayne thing with your voice come Raw!! Good job though. i also think you should get out of the Trap song thing its Fading back to the original concepts of hip hop..

Keep up the good work my brother never let nobody tell you that you can't do anything in life I'm down with doing features or featuring artists on a song so if your down let me know take care

Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...Nice job man...

Feeling the track all the way keep up the work man. Whole song was understandable and had a positive meaning to it. Critism end is just the quality up it up a notch everybody gotta start from somewhere but somewhere in your future look for better quality your stuff will be jamming believe that. Keep doing wat ya do though. Get better. Love

You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits! You really have talent. Keep up the great work and continue dropping hits!

Lyrics can you make them out? Some lyrics aren't in English, so you obviously can't comment on the lyrical content if you don't understand the language. But you can still hear the flow of words. All good songwriters choose words and phrases not just for their meaning but also for their sound and natural rhythmic quality.

Bro I like your realness and the truth is the light but to be honest you got a great flowjust speak a lil more clearly and then slow it down just a little bit so your listeners can get the concept you speaking on but all in all is a great song keep pushing. Also share my song Go for me its my club banger and I will do the same..