I'm gonna keep it 100 with ya. The production is not the greatest. It has a bit of a nasally sound to it. The hook is very simple and awkward. I understand what you were going for, but delivery is everything. Lyrically it's mediocre and the rhyme scheme is hard to follow. There were times that it was off beat as well. You asked for the truth and that's what you got. Keep it up though man. There's only progression ahead of you!

It's Garbage You Can Do Better Than This. I Mean You Just Need Some Practice, Nobody Is Perfect So It Is Essential For You To Master Your Art Craft Any Fool Can Tell That You GotIt But What Are You Going To Do With It

Ok I was totally surprise to hear the hook and then the verse came and made me smile. Not the typical kids Rap style I'm use to hearing from the South, but he got his message across. I think my brother should work on his delivery, the Track is Nice, he put a lot of thought in his story, sounds like he need to practice a bit more to build up his confidence, I can honestly say, I enjoyed it but it's not my cup of tea. Work on your delivery.

It's very original and different and i also engineer so if you need to get your tracks mix or masterd please let me know cause i can have this song sounding way crazy also master the beat!!!!

When you rap there should be fluctuation in you voice ago that the message you are trying to convey will get through to your audience. Also yippy should be on cue worth the music. In this song your tone in monotone meaning you hour the same more all throughout the song making it hit the ear in a wrong way. I would also try to include more metaphores and different rhythms and rhyming styles. I can tell that the beat you picked was just because not because you really liked it. It is low in the back ground so you hear more of your voice and less of the beat and then when you do hear the beat its not matching up to your words throwing off the song. I would work on better mixing and mastering so you can get the full effect of the song because even if you rap of beat the song would still pop having a better sound quality

I don't think the beat matches your flow for this song. Your flow is like a drip drop type of style or effect and it would take a unique beat to make that flow sound official. The hook needs major work done to it as well. I can admire your effort as I can tell that you must have just gotten started or that you don't do this often. I would continue to work on my craft, get honest feedback from "honest" friends or other people who will listen. Keep Working.

seems like you are creative with coming up with concepts.. decent instrumental for a pop type of track or something new age..you just need to put more effort into projecting your voice along with rhythms..best i can say is keep up the practice and improve... this is constructive criticism..

Need to be able to feel the music. Maybe change the wording and try having fun with it. Can't tell if you are trying to rap or make it an alternative or country type song. Sorry for the tough criticism

I'm not an artist or fan of this genre but i guess for the people that like this kind of genre of music would say it's really good me personally i think the artist has a really great voice and i think that this artist has allot of great things coming they're way like i said I'm not an artist or fan of this genre but to me it's sounds alright on a personal level i dont know anybody thats a fan or artist of this genre

 Dope track will definitely be looking out for more to come and recommending your work to help build the anticipation and notoriety keep up the work keep pushing foward to help push the culture...salute!!!

YESS I SAY AT HAND RUDDE OFF O.D BUT EARLYER I WUZ IN COME DOWN NOW I WANT TO COME BACK DOWN IFF YOU NO WAT I MEAN SO HEAR IT AT AN OVERDOZED HIGHEST BEST YOU GOT THE BEAT BUT LIAR LIAR LIRICALLY SOUNDS LIKE O.D SHIT IN A REAL DOWNER AND THATS LIKE THAT CUTT DRUGGZ I JUST ACAPELLA IT OUT AND THE BEAT ON BACK GROUND RANDOM ONE I THOUGHT WENT WITH MY LIRICS POINT BEING IS THIS YOU KEEP AT IT YOU WILL HAVE SUCESS CUZ AT THIS GAME THERE IS NO RIGHT OR WRONG ANSWER AT LEAST AT MY BEST HIGH RIGHT NOW I CCAN TELL YOU YOU IS A LIAR IF YOU BELEIVE IN WHAT OTHERS ARE SAYING ABOUT ME NOT THE WHY YOU CHOSE TO LET ME DESIDE GOOD OR BAD I SAY GOOD BEAT BAD VOCALS BUT ALMOST THERE PASE IT UP IS WHY I SAY JUST LIKE O.D!

I feel you need to pick better beats to rap to. I feel you need to change your delivery. Like the way you say the verse. You got one thing going on here and thats dedication to complete a song. But the rest got to go. I am never about crushing people, If you got the dedication to improve your skills not playing around and to take it serious, you can do it. I will tell you a trick someone told me, they used this method and it helps me sometimes when I am stuck writing. Invest In a thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary or even use online rhyming dictionary or thesauraus. Or even try not writing sometimes the best stuff comes when we freestyle cause the delivery is based on how the beat makes you feel. Keep spitting the lines over and over in your head slowly adding sentence after sentence. These are just little things to help on your success.. Or remember your verse word for word so you can change the speed of the verse any way you want instead of sounding like your reading it straight off of paper... thats the worst way to do it..You can throw all the stuff I say out the window if you like. or If you need any more advice hit me up in my inbox. I wish you success in the thing you love my friend. Take care.

I love the originality and creative take on a upbeat southern wave. Thanks for some good music i would say. #McbethSagittarius #XTENDOGANG #KINGME straight like that. Always stay true to your sound.

Nice flow and that beat is a banger!!! Where can I go to download and share all your music? What is your Twitter/Facebook/Instagram? Can I find you music on iTunes/Spotify/Pandora? Keep doing your thing!!

Song is ok,you can do it over and GROVE to the beat a little more,put some swagg to it...beat is dope though....keep doing what you do,you have to start from some where,so continue to keep punch record's..

First off id like to Thank you for letting me give you a review definitely felt the good vibes coming from this track had to show this song to my roommates with the quickness when i heard some real life action goin down it may not have the mainstream feel but it was still a great song when my recommend and earn time come back up ill share your music on my social media outlets keep up the good work and goodluck with getting shows this is definitely a great song

Hello Hidden Thoughts I listened to your song entirely before I made this review. So I'll start with the production, I like it. the vocals sounds cool too. Especially the ooh. This is Archa Da Wizard looking forward to hearing something else soon. I wonder if you have anything for sale on iTunes or spotify. If so hmu @archadawizard. If want some beats I will definitely work you.

Cool track Yes you can find me on iTunes Google play Spotfy and all other online music out lets I us N1M for the promotional aspects due to the fact I am totally independent..... I believe that my music is from GOD to help heal the people through good vibrations and new styles follow me on IG @lanalebrown and in Facebook @lanalebrown and Twitter @pointdex1600 I stay with new music for you to get jiggy to also my video on YouTube search for POINTDEX or LANALE BROWN its all me  and thank you for your support 

I didn't really like it. I think you can improve your delivery and bars. You didn't sound excited. If you don't feel the sound, how can you get your fans to feel the song.Keep working, keep pushing, success does not come over night.

Hidden Thoughts I been waiting to review your song. In this rap industry it is people that would not take the time to listen once the song didn't meet their status of a radio play song. I am a listener or what the artist is painting through his poetry rhythm that is better known as rap. Your storyline was consistent and I can appreciate that part. Of course I can say quality of production, but not all of my music is quality production. It is the effort that counts and you finished the song, so for that you did well. Maybe tighten up you delivery, get a lil more comfortable with your beat and you should be good. ~Fel D. Shellshock~