you got a real cool vibe and sound your music not to much going on with the track makes it easy to enjoy makes you want to sit back smoke a blunt and groove to the vibe of the music keep up the hard/good work and i'll see you at the top... FOLLOW me on INSTAGRAM & TWITTER and like me on FACEBOOK http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005 http://instagram.com/pinhead_gotti https://twitter.com/pinhead_gotti OR on vine/iampinhead_gotti

To all whose talking bout my language and who says my song wont sell! its 5 out of 900 people who says my song "I can get with her" wont be liked by parents. but my aim is a catchy hook which I have presented. For the language isn't aim in a bad way. the other 900 people loves the song and i have the proof of course I know there are always going to be people that doesn't like the song. but I am not here to please everyone and believe me I appreciate the criticize comments but remember its my music and what i feel and what others feel this is a good song. Now, by saying my song isn't finished, so there is more stuff that needs to be done. No I'm not changing the lyrics but adding more bass as some have requested no problem but the lyrics are there and staying.. Thanks to all who has positive things to say and thanks to all who has bad things to say. The artist ItsVinnumShawtii

You will lose out on the bad language in the song. Sorry. Find that the whole song is very monotonous and nothing much in the lyrics which are of zero value. You must realise that 75% of the world are very conservative, if you want your music to sell only in the USA and in some areas of the USA, then you have your market, but you will find that explicit songs are not popular anymore and you will be back graded because of the lyrics and the language. Choose your market, do you want the million young ones whose money is paid for their parents or do you want the mother to buy the kid your song because it has a good sound and clean lyrics. The choice is yours.

Constructive: as a composition the song seems to all be there. Needs a bad-ass bass part to make it jump. I don't give a fuck about the profanity BUT we have learned that CLEVER innuendo (while more difficult to write) gets more attention from serious fans... do your own thing but listen to people. Final comment: I get the feeling that you have not discover YOUR sound yet... Make it yours, make it stick out, make listeners say "who is this"... being provocative will requiere more than saying "fuck" repeatedly.. you will find it IF you work hard and keep going!

ayye i fucks wit this id bang this in the whip or even when im fuckin a shawty R.T keep it up!!! check out my music as well!!!! ~Angelik Pyro

I couldn't really get into this one. The beat was mixed way too low. I didn't really like the high pitched rapping. Everything needs more power.

Not a bad song I just feel like you could have done better keep grinding.

Nice track , take out the profanity, add some bass , you got a great song

Personally not my type of music but great effort, not sure if you should make this your single just yet cause I think you can do more with the music, perhaps add more bass, but overall entertaining and good luck

Hi, Nice to hear female lyrics, what is more U have got very interesting rhyme technique. You perfectly keep pace on this track. Not really like the music, for me there is a lack of power maybe becouse of the drum part you could improve the sund of it by better mixing and using stronger bass. However I realy like your flow. Keep It Real Galimatias Squad

I can do without the language though, just remember you want to be able to play your music in all venues. re-write the lyrics

well bein that you are a female artist with this type of style it will pass for the local club scene its a good track an a good idea hook was very catchy lyrics was simple but simple isnt bad in this situation...but overall it was a good track that would succeed in the local club area bein that you are from atl

i would like to say coming from a young ladies point of view, all i heard throughout the song was shorty stay fresh she no she f**ing clean, and all about making her scream. Sorry it was to typical for me and had no depth to the song. i know thats what guys like but from a songs point of view it sounded typical. Also there was a little to much autotune for my taste.

Absolutely hate this..from A to Z. It's that nasty, greasy, illiterate southern rap that makes me cringe. On top of that, it's sub par even by THAT style's standards!lol. Terrible.

Great concept with good style. However, you have to be careful in your presentation. Mix down and mastering is very important to any final product in music. Make certain that your vocals, whether lead or background are clear and all words are understood. Improper pronunciation of words can actually drag any song, even if you are using ebonics. Also, make sure that you have carefully thought out the type of audience that you are trying to reach. If the intended audience is commercial vs. club, then be sure to watch the words you use as some words are more offensive than others. In order to stand above all other artist, you have to be original in thought, speech and composition. Otherwise, you will be categorized as many other artist out there with the same basic style rap. Best wishes and keep going. Don't stop because you receive reviews that are not to your liking. I also am an artist, musician, producer and publisher. So in order to reach the top, pay less attention to those around you as many will want to spare your feeling instead of telling you the truth. You have a good product, now perfect it!!