Need better mixing on your vocals...nice song though.. It fits the beat. I just think your backing vocals and adlibs are to high. Makes your mood up and is nice riding music. Keep up the good work

This is actually a good fit in song title, and feel of the song in real time reality. Although the artist sounds laid back baked even. This song is a decent start of an beginners track record but you lose your best chance of being considered a pro by using tagged beats. Not only that, but you run the risk of creating a song that if it goes popular you have to share with a complete stranger, now is that fair to you? Take some time to record more, and never use tagged beats no selfrespecting aspiring artist can sell any music if it's on a tagged beat..

Honestly bro you killed it all over good beat nice tempo I like how you went in like you mean it. This track gon get far bro just make sure you promote that shit well, I believe in it. At first I thought it was just like another regular track but as skim thru it its solid and the base is pretty strong. Good job bro keep doing your thing make sure you watch over your career cuz you got the flow, the lyrics and the style so if you don't make it that's in you. Just keep him coming fam!

Hook could be more up lifting but verses are fire big dog beat is smooth as hell first thing I heard today that really moves after the second verse the hook wins you over very nice Jack im new to the site so I'll be keeping up with you big dog keep it coming

Throw back sound when the track first started had to look at the category thought it was RnB great instrumentation I live in Vegas so I hear a lot of this sound when some of our lounge acts head into the Hip hop lane nice female voice on the hook could have wrote a few more lines to the hook though overall nice party groove great job...

Dope intro nice melody I can here this slappn bro u should put this out definitely that heat I'll recommend this anytime stay grindn wrk hard go hard all is well wen take care of ur craft

I like the begining the beat is preety chill and cool. The rap os preety cool too. I like the flow. Im not realöy feeling the hook. The rap is good but when it gets over to the hook it kind of takes away the energy. Besides that nice

It's a really nice Beat,i like the synth got a nice melody. The RapFlow is also really good. You got a nice Voice man. Good Work,hope to hear more from you. The perfect music for chillin and ridin'.

The song cool but i think it could be more hyped up with your flow. Try not to sound like your reading it off paper. Get into it more. The lyrics are good. The mixing could b better Nice Beat the bass and instruments is dope. Over all i could here this in the club once fixed.

Your bars on fire and I like your flow but truthfully the hook does not do this song any justice. I think it needs something a bit more catchy. if you either fix or replace the hook this song could definitely be a force to reckon with. This song sounds like it could be a great club banger str8 up! Fix the hook brah real talk!

Good shit bra keep pushing it don't stop stay at it nephew me myself I stay in the lab 24/7 all it take is one song to put you on top an the rest is up to you that's why it's always good to master your flow

Definitely diggin this one. Somethin for the ladies. I can see this being played in the club. I also like your lyricism in the verses. But the hook wasn't catchy enough for me. I looked forward to hearing your next verses while listening, the hook left me wanting something more or different however. So I just suggest working on hooks that folks will remember and you're good...

This song has potential but needs more improvement. The chorus should sound way better when singing or holding words for periods of time. The verses are ok. I think some parts should be re-recorded to enhance certain parts of the song. The beat is ok as well. If you need beats visit the links in my bio or message me on this site. Keep up the good work!

Wow for me I don't think criticism is necessary for this single song. Honestly I am blown away. Even though the title of the song is far from the best but the song is very much closer to the best . The aliment of the lyrics is superb . You are a great lyricist and your words make sense . Overall the song is well produced because the volume of the instrumental and vocals is well balanced. Keep it up.

Good music is good music and the music is OK. I don't know what this song is about or what the subject matter of this song is. With your voice I feel like the content or concept of your lyrics should've been more specific oror about something else. The instrumental was pretty cool and I can kind of understand what you are trying to figure out with your vocals. With a little more time you can accomplish it. Good job I gave you a 3.1.

Yo Jack Frost what's good. First off I dig the beat bro though I think it should be pumped up base wise for whoever the producer is. The lyrics are nice bro as I am always one for lyrics and I like the rhymes and punchlines bro. Very west coast feel to it and I dig the hook I just think you should put more feeling into the hook to distinguish it more from the verses. Very ill song as I love the message in it bruh.