I see you got your own kinda swag with how you coming..I do think the lyrical part of it can be tightened up...but that's just because I love lyricism..I would say keep on doing what you do tho cuz you in ya own lane!

You got it brotha you just need to get this mastered, it's a major key to success. The song was being played loud in studio speakers and the levels of voice still very hard to hear. But Damn Fire Bars if you listen great work your lyrical content and message are great. We would love to network and help all we can. We are #SocialClick @Socialclickave keep up the craft.

S/O's 2 one of our fans by the name of "JaJa" great vibe and energy hope to work with you someday to put together nothing but bangerz and deffinately change the history of music inside and out!

WOW. I HAVE HEARD ALOT OF HIP HOP BUT THIS IS PROFOUND . I LOVE THE SPIRITUAL PLEAS AND I HEAR IT RELATING TO SO MANY THAT NEED TO HEAR WORDS SUCH AS THESE AND THE HIP HOP VIBE YOU LAY DOWN IS TIGHT. THIS IS WHAT I SAY IS THE FUTURE OF HIP HOP . WISDOM IN YOUR BARS AND STILL GOT YO' HEAD BOBBIN'. TOP NOTCH KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. LOVIN IT.

wussup bro i like ya concept for this track! good to hear something of substance and content! a quick tip though, i noticed your faced mix on the very, id focus more on the hook mixing and quantizing ya vocals to right the beat to compliment the sounds in the background! try nudging ya vocals to the left after you've recorded it, or splicing ya vocals to chop em in the correct spots but if your a die hard artist then hone ya craft some more in delivery and beat riding and ya mark will be known! stay up stay humble! Duh Brain signing off! Gud Ppls Ent

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This track is easy t listen too.. puts you in a certain type of mood ..which is always good. be sure and have your engineer check you your levels and Pitches. I give this 6 stars out of 10. Overal Good Job though

This song is very good! I feel your passion, I see your story. This is pure hip hop! The track is nice and it supports you..not overpowering! "I like waking up in the morning I'm my own sunshine" in my opinion should be your hook...it's hot. Your voice sounds good...small suggestion...the echo can be a little distracting. Try using only about 5-10% wetness on your delay plug-in. It will give you the echo as an afterthought instead of a competing factor. Other than that job well done! Respect!

The beat is good, ilike the flow for the song im not feeling the quality of how it sounds have clear hooks down the echos a lil bit and make sure you keep your aggressiveness as well overall good song keep goin harder each time

This actually caught my attention . I like rhyme scheme and everything . Music like this should be played all the time. Charleston up next . Clutch Time good music

I like the track and I like the flow. I also like the lyrics. This is a good song. While listening I can hear the pain in the lyrics and that made me feel it.

Nice beat. I like how it opens with one tone and goes up a couple notches. The repetitive part is a little too long. I like the rappers tone and the subject matter. I can't hear all the words. Out might be the mix. One of the verses sounds like it's being read But good work

I like this song... its deep to me.. The words you're saying people can really relate to.. So I definitely feel this.. Your voice had faded out a little on the second verse but altogether it's a great song

dats wassup dope Dope track! The track is okay for real. I like the meaning of the song honestly. But the bars and hook need more work. It seems like if you would've took your time and went harder it would've been better. Just take your time and put in the work. When you get together like I know you can I will see you at the top. Good luck!

Jaja, I hear ya boss! Conscious rap is always 100 wit me. We need more of this ish in mf deccs. I hear yo lyrical talent also im listening 3 times already. Being conscious of your society and being able to put it in art form "Muzik" is talent within itself. The craft is so important and tuning it is sumthn every artist myself included should shrive every time we sit wit a beat pen and pad. The song is real. Quality need to b better but we from the hood G so I kno we aint workn wit industry shit so it is wat it is. Wouldn't mind hearing mo from u partna Str8 up. 1Luv 1Nation--- RicoLaw

Sounds like vocals could be little titer and less reverb. But the mix sounds nice and clean.

I like your concept to double you word at the end of each line I like you just need to get your timing down and the song will bang out one thing I know is if it sounds like you believe in you your fans will believe in you so give your all when you record your music great job overall bro keep up the good work peace. CaNy Entertainment

I like your over all delivery as well as your subject matter you sound different that the rest, its just missing a little fine tuning such as measuring your breathing the delivery sounds slightly forced. The songs production could use a little tweaking on the background vocals. Fine tune the mix & You got it!

productions good man, a little bit of tupac in the music i hear... radio friendly also,.. personally bro, i prefer a touch less delay on the vox durinfg the verse etc, so it kicks for the hook..but respect and blessings..you no joke! all the best for future project fam! CVJ

CONTINUE TO CREATE ORIGINAL MUSIC, PUT OUT MUSIC THAT OPENS YOUR CREATIVE MINDSET AND STAY FOCUSED!!! KEEP UP THE HUSTLE, CANT STOP, WONT STOP!! CONTINUE TO CREATE ORIGINAL MUSIC, PUT OUT MUSIC THAT OPENS YOUR CREATIVE MINDSET AND STAY FOCUSED!!! KEEP UP THE HUSTLE, CANT STOP, WONT STOP!!