This right here is raw. You spittin about some real shyt that people can relate to. Shyt we all gotta get up and grind...no buts or maybes. Keep up that energy cuz you got it bruh. I need to download this and keep it on my favs playlist. I only knock the best of the best and the hardest of the hardest. Keep grinding and doing ya thing bruh. This that crack and Ima stay vibing to it until the speaker breaks. Kronik Flamez

OK song, I didn't really understand what the concept of the song was but I thought the vocals are OK. I think it's OK but it feels like a ghost is on it. The beat was OK. I think you should turn the beat up and use a little less reverb, a different reverb or a simple one would fit your vocals. I gave it a 3.3 I think.

Hello JAJA I would like to start off by saying that your recording quality takes a lot of great potential away from this song. I could not really get past that aspect of the song so I was not really paying attention to your flow or delivery and those two things are key factor to a great song. Also if you choose a song to record to do not record to tagged beats it shows potential fans that you are not serious about your craft I have no idea what you were speaking about in the song were you telling a story in sequential order or were you all over the place is the question i have for you

Well the first thing I have to say is you have to get rid of that reverb or echo. It was getting really annoying. It really took away from the overall work. The beat is really low. On top of the echo it was just tough to listen to. I think you were freestyling so I'm not got to really go on the actual lyrics. For what it is, its just hard to listen to. The beat was very repetitive. Well It may not be, but I could really hear it. Keep going fam. I remember being in the beginning stages of my career. Never quite. Just keep flowing.

you are amazing Keep a very wonderful song that's something crazy, you are very cool He continued to give the best I really enjoyed listening in Songs for your Has continued to issue songs Because you are wonderful

First know this is just my opinion, a little hard for me to feel the grove in your rap, I love the subject matter, I like the tracks also just want to feel you in the pocket of the track groove....and pick a part for a hook and repeat it to lock your listeners ear in the flow!! Peace!! Seven minutes is a little long for airplay, shorten it and get to the point ......

beats are tight, and the flow is good,.. and obviously there is some decent content...however, to keep it dynamic, I reckon it needs to be re- arranged...still...a good track,overall..

its a good song but the only way to get an audience is to make it more relatable like give the people a verse where they can be like ive been thru this or this happened to me if you listen to my songs youll see verses that people relate to like in the louisiana song

This song is very relatable to many inner city youths out here in the world that is in the struggle this track is very motivational I salute my homies in Cali keep up the good work

This is some of the most potent lyrics I've heard in a while coming out of the south. It actually sounds like NY, but with more bravado as you come with the life story that brought you to this point. I'm always a fan of long rap songs, and this is definitely a fave of mine. My only critique would be to get you some better recording methods, because the beat kind of drowns out the lyrics. Also it is a little off-key and upon extra listens the south definitely comes through (which is good). -ManII

Nice track! I can hear the potential in this song. Anyone with an ear for music can. Keep up the good work. I will continue to follow. Please check out my music as well. Peace.

Hey Jaja, I like the sound of your voice it is very distinctive. You have a good tone. Im not a lover of this track as it sounds more like its something created for a mix tape rather than a single. Much respect for the effort of going in and doing you as this game very hard to make waves in. My main advice would be to keep up the works but concentrating on raising your skill levels, sounding good is cool but timing destroys that in one go. This production is too long to be a single so I would also recommend using a standard song structure intro-verse-chorus-verse etc. This allows listeners who don’t know you to understand where they are in your song. Attention spans are short so anybody who don't know you and who is not impressed will switch off fast. Keep grinding king. Kewba The Music Man

When I heard this song I was amazed by the lyrical cotent and the beauty of you voice is so good! Overall I give this song n 8/10 its very good and worth the listen and you kinda remind me of luke james

Your songs has a lot of potential but the biggest problem I hear are the vocals. I can hear your message clearly but your volumes don't match. Your lead vocals are in the background when they should be in the forefront. If you can take the raw vocals to an engineer who can clean it up I think you'll have a decent track on your hands.The track is a bit long also. I don't know to many people with the patience to listen to a track that's 5 mins long let alone 7. If you can cut out a couple minutes and get the meat of what you're trying to say on this track that would help a lot.

It's a real track yo. The fact you put so much emotion in it is so dope. I say keep upgrading your sound and keep stepping up your lyrical content. -Quanner

First of all, let me say this is a good try but it needs some work, recording needs to clean up and the vocals is not fully flowing on the track and it kinda throws everything off but i also love the fact your being real with the lyrics, real life. with a little more work clean up the levels on the track and a little better flow as i said before this could be great.

I Checked Your Music Review BleSs Up Fam.. Nice Tune... May JAH Bless You Continually In Your Career.. I Love Listening Different Style And Genres,Awesome Work.

i can tell you have passion, but your audio quality is lacking my brother. i would also suggest getting more in depth within lyricism, too much of the same words can begin to leave a song sounding stagnant...all respect homie

The song was okay, but it could be a lot better. I'm not sure how I feel about repeating the same line right after you just said it. I liked the music. However the song was too long. Also due to the repeating I never really got a good sense of the rappers' abilities.

You have unique delivery. I like that is has relative content with authentic feelings. The mix gets a little bland though with the constant effects on the vocals. Just some constructive criticism. Try using the envelope some to bring about some suspense throughout the verses. I think this could be some good music a movie. The production is I'll! Sound like some Dipset shit! I'm gonna check out your other tracks also. You got my attention off the strength that your style is different.