This music sounds beautiful and the recording is well done. This sounds like it is about an actual experience of someone in a car accident who survived and lost their lover. However there are some odd contradictions in the lyrics and music. In the first instrumental break the music sound lilting and carefree, very different from the more somber introduction. The lyric about what is beneath us, so different from the coven? is very confusing. This song would definitely appeal to those who love cleverness ahead of real emotion or content. It would do well on public broadcasting especially with a college student dj on a college station. My own songs are more direct so that people know what I am singing about.

Greta job man I would like for you to do a hook similar contact me at Jovanwiggins2@gmail.com and send your music also

I love the originality and the changes. The vocals overall are appealing. The instrumentation is well done, would make a great soundtrack. Reminds me of the Juno soundtrack. the lyrics appeal to me the most some somehow and the vocals, are the least appealing. I would suggest adding more harmony with an alternate voice, like female or contrasting male, at certain junctions to bring out the beauty of the song. Love the Lyrics ...

Very nice voice, very pleasant. Nice music introduction. Music pleasant to soothing. Has potential. Good lyrics too. Nice mix of rhythms and intriguing. Sorry for the "Nice" Bit, but it is nice! Loved the harmony, I hope that is better :) Good luck and see you on reverbnation/taba then I can share your music around :)

I liked the song. Feels a bit disjointed but could be the arrangement. Good vocals, a little pitchy here and there, and music is very well done. My only real comment is that it didn't engage me for the whole song, boring after a while. Good tune!

It is a nice song. you have a nice voice and melody. only thing is it kind of makes me feel like dragging. It doesn't get me really interested & into you. I am mainly listening to the instrumental

you got a real cool vibe and sound your music not to much going on with the track makes it easy to enjoy makes you want to sit back smoke a blunt and groove to the vibe of the music keep up the hard/good work and i'll see you at the top... FOLLOW me on INSTAGRAM & TWITTER and like me on FACEBOOK http://www.facebook.com/pages/Mizzle-Bean-Records/177686148915005 http://instagram.com/pinhead_gotti https://twitter.com/pinhead_gotti OR on vine/iampinhead_gotti

Not bad in some aspects of the songwriting; though not terribly exciting or original. The vocal melody and it's delivery lack some color and strength; but not un-musical.

nice mellow tune. I can hear this being used in an indie movie soundtrack likely over a montage kind of scene. There seems to be some contrasting moods throughout the tune, lifts and drops, hope and despair.

good work